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Topic Started: Oct 8 2007, 05:54 PM (54 Views)
Arcanium	Oct 8 2007, 05:54 PM Post #1
(Site Admin) Posts: 151 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: August 19, 2007	Basically what it means, making up story's from looking at random pictures or scenery. Well I don't do either, I use my imagination to create my essay's which turn out to be pretty good sometimes. This story that I'm about to type is made by me so don't use it without my premission(which would always be a yes, I just don't like things being taken away from me behind my back and I'm sure you all feel the same way). I didn't get to finish it but I'll get around to it sometime soon. "The Pretender" My name is James William, I've been on the New York police force for ten years now. I've been betrayed, accussed and bankrupted from an inside job my so called partner was in on. It was a tipical Thursday morning, we both came in to do some quick paper work work before we do our routine patrols. My partner Jimmy Henderson, said he had to do some quick earens before we go so I covered for him until he returned. Two hours later, my partner stil hasn't came back, and I just got a call stating a robbery on 59th Street. So I decided to go investigate by myself. When I got there I saw a few men running down the alley across the street from the scene so I went after them and calling in some back up. One of the men turned quickly and open-fired on to my crusier wind shield. I managed to get out and shhot him in the leg and upper left arm. I disarmed him and removed his mask and it was Jimmy. He started yelling at me saying I blew his cover and what not. He got up and when I turned to get my radio, he took my night stick and started to beat me down until he saw two more police crusier's coming. He though he had killed me, he was wrong. I was lieing in a medical bed wondering where I was and why was I so sore. No sooner later Captain Stimulenski walked in to check up on me, he told me to take a few days off and go see him in his office when I get back. Friday came no easier than Thursday. I woke up seeing a flashing light coming from under my bed, so I bent down to see what it was. A black box strapped to the bed with two minutes lefted on the counter. I quickly detached the plugs attached to me andran out of the room screaming for everyone to leave. We were nearly half way down the stairs when the bomb set off still leaving a heavy impact on us. We were standing outside the hospital for emergency vehicle's to come and transport pactients to local hospital. All I heard for over hours were people screaming and crying for help. In the crowed I was able to see Jimmy and some of his guys from afar distance seaching through the crowd of people that are dead.I quickly lefted to my apartment to gather up some new clothing and supplies until when I got there my whole apartment was thrashed. Jewerly was scattered everywhere. I did one of the biggest mistakes of my life by picking up of the jewlery to idenitify it if was the stolen jewlery, I was right. Siren's were soon came louder and louder, probably coming here for the stolen jewlery reported by Jimmy, so I went out my back window down the fire escape.............. To be continued! So that's all I got so far from my imagination, so what do you guys think?



Unity	Oct 9 2007, 08:48 PM Post #2
Site Administrator Posts: 147 Group: Co-Admin Member #13 Joined: September 26, 2007	Really good! Write some more, it could improve a lot from where you left it.
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Arcanium	Oct 14 2007, 06:59 PM Post #3
(Site Admin) Posts: 151 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: August 19, 2007	Thank's and I will .



Unity	Jul 16 2008, 03:03 PM Post #4
Site Administrator Posts: 147 Group: Co-Admin Member #13 Joined: September 26, 2007	Goos job backing that up, thar.
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