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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

Last picture's subject looks slightly imbalanced, as though he's leaning forward slightly.

The second picture's subject is slightly disproportioned. The neck seems a little long for the body in general.

The fourth picture is rather good, but I might suggest that the subject's neck be thinned slightly.

I think the third one's my favorite. All the drawings are well-detailed otherwise. I'd just suggest you work on proportioning your characters better. I have somewhat similar problems--mainly, balancing the length of the upper legs and lower legs. I tend to make the thighs too long.
Mirar on Sep 8 2007
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nigga please
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