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| Soja | Apr 9 2007, 02:13 AM |
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves
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Last picture's subject looks slightly imbalanced, as though he's leaning forward slightly. The second picture's subject is slightly disproportioned. The neck seems a little long for the body in general. The fourth picture is rather good, but I might suggest that the subject's neck be thinned slightly. I think the third one's my favorite. All the drawings are well-detailed otherwise. I'd just suggest you work on proportioning your characters better. I have somewhat similar problems--mainly, balancing the length of the upper legs and lower legs. I tend to make the thighs too long. |
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