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Soja	Mar 3 2008, 03:20 AM
Gentle Water, Crashing Waves Posts: 5,176 Group: Global Moderator Member #451 Joined: October 15, 2005	Besides substituting words with those that sounded right but had the wrong meaning, and a few juxtapositions with words that sounded similar, it's pretty good. Nice pacing. Interesting characters, even for this little bit. Also, see Rin's advice above this post. Otherwise, I approve.
	Mirar on Sep 8 2007 06:08 PM nigga please Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover

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