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Rin	Mar 7 2008, 12:41 AM
TOTALLY A MAN Posts: 2,148 Group: Veteran Member #111 Joined: June 10, 2005	Uh alright. I agree with Rock in that your descriptive style is getting better. Problem is, possibly too good. As Hollie said it took up a lot of time. I understand the need to portray as much detail as one can into a story because we really want the readers to know exactly how vibrant and awesome our visions are, but you have to mindful of their attention span too. Good writers find an equilibrium and make awesome stories that make description move fast enough that it seems as though it's not there at all. Don't know if you'll take that into account considering my latest work is really informal comparatively XD Otherwise, this is really unfolding. Also the first thing I thought at the end was that Nathan was incestuous =[
	Av and Sig were definitely not made by Pendant or fez.

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