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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

I've seen Natalie's inspiration. I said, "I'd tap that." Also, since Pie was writing this at the same time as we were conversing, I may have influenced that. *Bowser laugh*

Psio, you have good work here. As far as description, I say keep it up. Unlike SOME people here, I like to know if the grass is green and fresh, brown and dead, or stained red as the bloody earth.

(No offense at all, Rin, I was just being a prick.)

But Rin does have a point. Normally, authors write however they feel and the audience that likes it will become a fanbase. On the other hand, when you write for an audience and you know their tastes, you should probably be conservative in description. I already told you all this in IM, so eh.

Good chapter. Write moar plx.
Mirar on Sep 8 2007
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nigga please
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