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| Rin | Mar 7 2008, 06:45 PM |
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TOTALLY A MAN
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Wow, ok, that chapter was a little more dialog intensive Captain Kuddly's cool XD Soja, I didn't mean to say I don't like knowing those details. I love knowing what the author wants to see, but I still think it's important for a reader to put their own twist to a story so they can connect with it more at least. Also if such details were put into a single block of text, then it's tough to read. Rather than giving a full description in one paragraph, gradually paint a picture as the story unfolds. If...that made any sense. |
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