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Soja	Mar 8 2008, 03:26 AM
Gentle Water, Crashing Waves Posts: 5,177 Group: Global Moderator Member #451 Joined: October 15, 2005	I find it quite brutal in its irony how Kuddly's men (lol Kuddly) are being commanded to use Natalie in the same way that the man in the flashback used her to defeat Nathan. Asides from the minor grammatical problems I relayed to you on AIM, you managed to instill this chapter with a sense of palpitating desperation. I liked it, for its dramatic value certainly, and I do enjoy seeing characters develop. Pity I have to wait until work tomorrow or Sunday to read the next update.
	Mirar on Sep 8 2007 06:08 PM nigga please Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover

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