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"Stop fooling around, this is a serious matter, here let me get her if you're too scared."

. . . This bit of speech made me go UGH. It just sounds horrible.

Otherwise, it was pretty good. I think in some parts you were a little too over-descriptive, but it's not a major deal since it was pretty minor.
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Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: "Be good, because if you're not, Arick will come down that chimney instead of Santa, and instead of toys he has choloroform, a hacksaw, and a burlap sack."
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Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: I'm a horrible rolemodel.
HØ¿¿¥ says: I'll take extra care not to blow my neighbourhood up, I promise
Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: Also don't jam forks in strange orifices.
Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: ...Wait, that didn't come out right
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