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Masaki	Aug 18 2008, 01:56 PM
Posts: 71 Group: FEFFer Member #1,986 Joined: July 10, 2008	That is... one fucked up story. Once again, really well written, the dialouge is well done and so is the narration. The "Cliche" phrase is placed at the right places except maybe you should have ended that chapter with it. Also, you could have put more detail into the training the 4 did. This fan-fic leaves me questioning YOUR mental stability >>


Genesis Project · Fan Fiction