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Psiwri	Dec 11 2008, 12:42 PM
Too Many Words Posts: 11,133 Group: Veteran Member #77 Joined: June 9, 2005	Now, I didn't actually read (=/) but I still made an observation while scrolling. Lots and lots of paragraphs start with "he" or "his" all over the place, now this is minor at best but you might want to think about starting them with a little more variance or something. ... I'll go away now.
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