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+Hollie
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Feb 3 2009, 04:35 PM
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- Calvin Coolidge
- Feb 3 2009, 12:27 AM
- Aleksandr
- Feb 2 2009, 09:23 PM
He was too fast too follow. Before Psio knew what was happening, a knife has passed over his shoulder and buried itself in the door behind him.
It's nitpicky, and it's probably a typo, but I hate it when people mix tenses. Other than that, it seems to be a pretty fun read. Yeah, just a typo. I tend to avoid that. Thanks for catching it.
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Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: "Be good, because if you're not, Arick will come down that chimney instead of Santa, and instead of toys he has choloroform, a hacksaw, and a burlap sack."
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Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: I'm a horrible rolemodel. HØ¿¿¥ says: I'll take extra care not to blow my neighbourhood up, I promise Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: Also don't jam forks in strange orifices. Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: ...Wait, that didn't come out right Known as Haar on Brand of Flame. Bitch.
 Formerly Margaret Thatcher, Aleksandr
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