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| Kamaitachi | Mar 24 2009, 06:32 PM |
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Um, D B C A was just a crock of shit. Whoever that writer is should be shot. B was nicely worded and simply put. I liked the concept of Judas' sin. C a masterpiece in topic. Oddly written with strange grammatical and syntax combinations. D elegant and poetic, the images were just lovely, even if at times they were a bit forced. E has a mishmash of ideas. It's not something that looks like it should be so short. The whole thing appears to be exposition with action. This could use some work. |
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