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Um, D B C

A was just a crock of shit. Whoever that writer is should be shot.

B was nicely worded and simply put. I liked the concept of Judas' sin.

C a masterpiece in topic. Oddly written with strange grammatical and syntax combinations.

D elegant and poetic, the images were just lovely, even if at times they were a bit forced.

E has a mishmash of ideas. It's not something that looks like it should be so short. The whole thing appears to be exposition with action. This could use some work.
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Pure genius.
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Well. 72% genius, 28% alcohol.

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