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| Topic Started: Sep 20 2008, 11:40 PM (261 Views) | |
| Deadpool | Sep 20 2008, 11:40 PM Post #1 |
 
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http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3385/as...reedcopysq5.png Original Image: http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3963/wa...inscreedqs3.jpg |
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| Wirtjr | Sep 21 2008, 01:01 PM Post #2 |
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The only thing that really bugs me is the "A" in the Assassin's Creed. Expert/Low Expert |
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| +Hollie | Sep 21 2008, 02:12 PM Post #3 |
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I like the colours and effects but the text just doesn't seem to fit to me. The A is especially annoying. I think the placement detracts a little from the main focus of the image too. Low Expert/High Inter |
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| Deadpool | Sep 21 2008, 03:03 PM Post #4 |
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I love how everybody goes berserker and even de-rank you for the text. The text can be edited in .5 minutes, and is not much of an issue seeing as it can be taken out easily. SO PLEASE, RANK THE FUCKING PIECE OVER THE DAMNED TEXT. Thank you very much. |
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| PhantomZero | Sep 21 2008, 03:13 PM Post #5 |
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The text is an important thing and if it really can be "fixed" in half a minute right away then why didn't you do it BEFORE dropping it? Everyone's entitled to their opinion so if you don't like it then don't drop it? The piece is alright and as they've already said the text is kinda "eh" with the weird A. There are a lot of grainy parts that look funny to me including the text. High Inter |
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| Deadpool | Sep 21 2008, 03:15 PM Post #6 |
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Because I never seem to see text as an important part and just generally ditch it, which I will be doing moar oftenly now so you all stop bitching about it. And with editing I did not mean fixing, I meant taking it out. |
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| PhantomZero | Sep 21 2008, 03:19 PM Post #7 |
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Removing something is also called fixing a piece in general to make it look better which is what i meant Dude what the hell is your problem? You drop a piece for CRITIQUE and we're doing just that which also means we point out flaws of specific pieces. I'm positive you didn't drop a piece so we would all praise it with our niec wub cuz we're barney in da inside but god damn we're listing OPINIONS not BITCHING. |
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| Deadpool | Sep 21 2008, 03:30 PM Post #8 |
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Sorry, but it just bugs me because I want to improve the main piece but all I get is "I don't like the text." I mean, you gave me a High Inter, now, that's obviously not only because of the Text, and that's what I want to know, the flaws on the actual thing. I cannot improve anything if all I get is "lolurtextsucks", and if you are nice enough then maybe even suggest how to improve. |
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| 180degrees | Sep 21 2008, 03:35 PM Post #9 |
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The piece is overly sharp and there's random red blotches everywhere. If you want to go for the blood effect, make sure those blotches aren't in random places. High Inter. |
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| Greth | Sep 21 2008, 03:39 PM Post #10 |
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Sorry bro, but the text, if added, is important as any other part of the project. You also need to chill out. Okay the outside corners where the guys meet the black, it seems funny to me. It feels like you went berserk with filter effects and didn't really think about them as much as you could've; that's nto to say you didn't, that's just my way of saying that it's too much. To be honest, this piece would've been much, MUCH better looking if you had muted the red a bit. considering the matter of the subject, i feel like if you went a little less vibrant, it would've looked nicer. And the A is just bad, dude. You hate it, but that's how it is. This is what critiquing is for. Simply put, it doesn't look right. Either fix it, or take it out. I think it would look really nice if you took the time to fix the 'A'. The 'T' also while we're on the subject matter. High Inter. |
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| Deadpool | Sep 21 2008, 03:41 PM Post #11 |
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Finally. Thanks Klavier Gavin, and thanks Greth. |
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| -HJ- | Sep 21 2008, 03:59 PM Post #12 |
I've failed to come up with something witty, so I hope you will enjoy this filler text instead.
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I don't see why you even consider text something seperate from the main piece, tbh. You could add some blood splatter, smudge, whatever thingy to the piece, blend the render with the background or add some text. In essence, it's all part of the main piece. Text is just an effect like all the other things I mentioned, so if text happens to be the worst (or even the only bad) effect on your piece, get ready to recieve critique on that. If you wanted critique on how to do blood splatters, you should have said something like ''I'm aware my blood splatters need work, so please comment on that.'' |
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| +Cubic | Sep 21 2008, 04:59 PM Post #13 |
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Text is an important part of the peice itself. Don't go bitching at us because we think it sucks and detracts from the rest of the image. Don't bitch next time you want a critique, or else your topic will be locked. |
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| Feez | Sep 21 2008, 11:15 PM Post #14 |
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Have a nice day. I'm not even allowing this to be ranked. Locked. |
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