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| Write-A-Song; Original stuffs. Whut? | |
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| Topic Started: Sep 30 2008, 01:25 PM (352 Views) | |
| Dragon_Sniper | Dec 1 2008, 09:59 PM Post #16 |
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mmmmmmmatt cassel
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Wow, that was really interesting and colourful. I liked the word choice. Nicely done. |
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| +Hollie | Dec 2 2008, 12:00 PM Post #17 |
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I have to admit that I didn't like it much. The beginning felt awkward. The metaphor wasn't a bad choice, per se, but something about it just rubbed me the wrong way. Then the rest of it was insanely boring - I just skim-read. The final bit was a little wtf because up to that point it seemed a fairly happy piece. I much prefer the crazy guy. Hmm. I need to do another one of these soon. |
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| +Reaver | Dec 2 2008, 08:19 PM Post #18 |
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That one sort of sputtered off and died. I suppose I didn't have enough in the middle to really make it work well, that or I didn't reference the idea that she seemed to be unhappy and almost different when she went into rooms or buildings. It felt nice to write it, but in hindsight sort of sucks. I reread it and decided I don't want responsibility for it, baleeted. Edited by Reaver, Dec 7 2008, 08:37 PM.
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