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Write-A-Song; Original stuffs. Whut?
Topic Started: Sep 30 2008, 01:25 PM (352 Views)
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mmmmmmmatt cassel

Wow, that was really interesting and colourful. I liked the word choice.

Nicely done.
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I have to admit that I didn't like it much. The beginning felt awkward. The metaphor wasn't a bad choice, per se, but something about it just rubbed me the wrong way. Then the rest of it was insanely boring - I just skim-read. The final bit was a little wtf because up to that point it seemed a fairly happy piece.

I much prefer the crazy guy. :pacman:

Hmm. I need to do another one of these soon.
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Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: "Be good, because if you're not, Arick will come down that chimney instead of Santa, and instead of toys he has choloroform, a hacksaw, and a burlap sack."
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Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: I'm a horrible rolemodel.
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Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: Also don't jam forks in strange orifices.
Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: ...Wait, that didn't come out right
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That one sort of sputtered off and died. I suppose I didn't have enough in the middle to really make it work well, that or I didn't reference the idea that she seemed to be unhappy and almost different when she went into rooms or buildings. It felt nice to write it, but in hindsight sort of sucks.

I reread it and decided I don't want responsibility for it, baleeted.
Edited by Reaver, Dec 7 2008, 08:37 PM.
Neon,June 8 2005
07:34 PM
@Reaver: Me grammer is better than ur post count newbie.

HJ, December 30 2008
06:20 PM
You gave Inui his first (and last?) sexual experience, didn't you? That's historic.

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