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| Topic Started: Jan 4 2009, 03:51 AM (764 Views) | |
| Feez | Jan 4 2009, 03:51 AM Post #1 |
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Ebullient Future
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The FEFF Persona 4 Retelling (TFEFFP4R) is a collaborative fanfiction project by PhantomZero and myself that will hopefully not die after 2 chapters. The fanfiction will be loosely based off of Shin Megami Tensei Persona 4 for the PS2. The overall format of the fiction will be similar to my Persona 3 fanfic, for those of you that remember it. Cast of Main Characters           DOJIMA IS NOW "ROCK" Promotional Banner:  The first chapter should be up by Sunday evening. Stay tuned! 
Edited by Feez, Jan 10 2009, 08:41 PM.
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| +Hollie | Jan 4 2009, 06:08 AM Post #2 |
Resident Brit
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PZ already told me a little about this. I think my character sounds awesome. 
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| Soja | Jan 4 2009, 06:29 AM Post #3 |
Gentle Water, Crashing Waves
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nothing personal, but I'M NOT GONNA READ IT BECAUSE I DON'T WANNA BE SPOLER'D ;___; Very slick presentation so far, though. I like. <3 |
Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover | |
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| PhantomZero | Jan 4 2009, 08:35 AM Post #4 |
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Swarley
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We're not doing a carbon copy though haha, we'll probably switch things up. |
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A NEW WORLD ORDER ~Known as PhantomZero, Mr. Noogen, Yosuke Hanamura | |
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| K' | Jan 4 2009, 05:32 PM Post #5 |
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hot damn this is so sexy i jizzed in my pants |
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| cool story bro | Jan 4 2009, 06:40 PM Post #6 |
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o man cant wait but is there going to be p4 spoilers in it because if so i'll pass |
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| Kazyen | Jan 4 2009, 06:48 PM Post #7 |
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ahaha wooow, sounds aweeeesome |
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| Feez | Jan 5 2009, 01:40 AM Post #8 |
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Ebullient Future
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In a mysterious and foggy world indescribable by human words alone, a lone limousine was flying to an unknown destination. Drinks, alcohol and music (and much Rickrolling) was playing inside of it. Yet, still, there was something mystifying about it. Inside sat a very, very old man with a large nose. To his left stood a young and beautiful woman with long silver hair. In front of them, sitting on a rather plain chair, was a young man; a teenager with honest eyes, gray hair, and simple clothing. “Welcome to the Velvet Limo,” said the old man, with enthusiasm. “It’s the Velvet Room, sir,” remarked the woman, almost suddenly. “Right, right,” replied the old man. “Well then, you do seem to be quite the remarkable guest.” He eyed the teenager with interest. “Quite extraordinary. We have had several guests here in the Velvet Room, but you have stood out to us.” The old man folded his hands. “My name is Soja, and this here is Crysta,” he said, gesturing towards the young woman with long silver hair. “You may consider this a fragment of your imagination. In the real world, you are simply sleeping a long sleep, unaware of your surroundings,” explained Crysta. “Well then,” said Soja, folding his hands yet again. “You will have quite the task ahead of you, but will you be prepared? What you will make of this situation can only be dictated by fate alone. Your largest mystery will unfold in the coming year. My goal is to aid you in solving it, but it is up to you to uncover this task on your own.” He took out a deck of cards, and randomly chose one, placed it on a table, and turned it over. “The Tower Arcana in the upright position, eh? My, my, something bad will indeed happen soon. You must be prepared…” “Now then,” Soja took out a peace of parchment and an ink pen. “Sign your name here and we will begin our journey….” The teenager took the pen from the man and signed his name eloquently. It read “Feez” The FEFF Persona 4 Retelling Chapter 1 – The Murder A train zoomed past the country side at rapid speed; it was headed for a rather remote town far away from the big city. Rural Japanese towns were often considered lonely and boring to city-folk, so as he sat there in the train, his mind raced with several questions. Questions about how life would be in this off-beat and isolated place; questions about what new friends he would make in the upcoming year; questions about what types of girls were in such a place… His parents had gone oversees for work, and he had been sent to Inaba to live with his uncle and cousin. The little note he was clenching in his hand said “Meet me at the closest gas station from where you get off at 5 pm. I’ll be there.” The train stopped and he stepped outside. The cloudy, yet peaceful weather penetrated his body almost instantly. He began to walk amongst the crowd of strangers; he knew no one and didn’t have any intention on becoming close to anyone—this was just another year at another high school in another part of this country. He was used to it. His parents always left him. Nothing new, only this time he’s going to stay with family. Big deal. As he walked, he saw a commercial playing on a large screen on one of buildings. It was some random idol promoting some drink. Idols were stupid; all they did was sell themselves out to someone and act as nothing more than an object. What a waste of a life. Who cares if they’re hot? Why idolize yourself off of an idiot? He arrived at the gas station he was to meet his uncle at. He glanced around and saw a man in his mid-years with a young daughter at his side. “Yo!” yelled the man, running towards him. “Feez, right?” Feez nodded. “Nice to have you here! The name’s Rock. I’m your mom's younger brother. Yep, that about sums it up.” He wore a dress shirt and pant, with a coat in one hand over his shoulder. He had a very dominating air about him. The little girl, undoubtedly Rock’s daughter, was hiding behind his leg. “Aww, don’t be shy, BloodRain; this is your cousin!” “H-hello,” stuttered BloodRain, “N-nice to meet you! My n-names BloodRain but most people just call me Rain-chan. Hehe.” She was young, probably around 5 or 6, and wore simple clothing. Feez nodded, smiling. “Haha, do you remember me?” asked Rock. “Nope,” responded Feez. “Well, you were just a baby when I last saw you. My, you certainly have grown quite a bit. Time sure does fly….anyways, I’m going to go ahead and pump some gas.” Rock went over to his parked car at the gas pump and asked for assistance from the nearest attendant. “I need to use the bathroom,” screeched Rain suddenly. The attendant gave directions to Rain and she sped off. He then eyed Feez mysteriously. Rock noticed and instantly spoke; “He’s just come here from the city. My nephew, the name’s Feez.” Feez nodded. “Nice to meet you,” replied the attendant. He walked up to Feez and stretched out his hand, inviting a shake. At this time, Rain had returned. Feez took the hand and shook it. “Nice to meet you as well.” The attendant smiled wryly, then let go. “I suppose my duty here is done. The gas has been pumped. Nice day to you all.” He left. Feez’s head suddenly began to hurt painfully; however, it was only for an instant. “Are you okay?” asked Rain. “Did you get carsick?” “No…I’m fine,” responded Feez. Rock apparently had failed to take notice, as he had been busy putting the pump and everything back together. “Alright guys, let’s go home!” The three of them got into the car and drove to Rock’s residence. It didn’t take them long to get there; Inaba wasn’t that big of a town. They arrived and went inside. The house had a nice and comfy feeling to it. “I’ll get dinner ready!” said Rain. A few minutes later the three of them were sitting on the table on the floor with a wide variety of food laid out for them. “So…your parents went overseas for work, and made you come here, eh? Life must be tough for you.” “I’m used to it,” replied Feez. “Well, it’s just Rain and I here, so it’ll be nice to have someone else around. Make yourself at home, alright?” “Yeah…thanks.” “Heh, don’t mention it. No need to be so formal though, you’re making Rain nervous!” Rain blushed a little. “Anyways, let’s eat!” said Rock, with enthusiasm. And just as he was going to pop a piece of juicy chicken into his mouth, his cell phone began to ring. “Ah, hell.” He answered it. “Yeah?” “Uh huh?” “What? Really?” “Ah…*sigh*…Alright.” “Yeah, I’ll be there right away.” He hung up. “Something’s come up, I gotta go for work. Jeez…at this hour…” “B-but..!” remarked Rain. “It can’t be helped Rain…you show him around the house and all, alright? I don’t know how long I’ll be gone.” Rock put on his coat, picked up a bag and headed out as quickly as possible. Rain, looking sad, turned on the TV. It was the weather forecast. “With storm clouds moving into the west, expect rain throughout the day tomorrow in most areas…” “Let’s eat,” said Rain, obviously bored. Feez nodded, and began to dig in. It was kind of silent in the room though… [ ] What does your dad do? [x] Cool silence sis [ ] Cool weather bro “…oh!” screeched Rain. “Sorry…well… uhmm… don’t worry about Dad. It’s always like this. He’s a detective, so he comes in and out all the time…” Just then the TV began showing the local news. “City council secretary Sentenal is under fire for an alleged relationship with a female reporter. His wife, enka ballad sensation Sexy Protoss Bitch, revealed to this station that she will likely pursue damages. In response, FEFF Television has decided to cancel all of announcer Lara-su Echidna’s televised appearances. Until allegations of an affair with Mr. Sentenal are resolved, she’ll remain off the air and out of the public eye.” “…cool story Mr. TV,” said Rain. “Hey, you’re learning fast,” said Feez, grinning. Rain changed the channel; it was a commercial for Junes, which, as Feez had heard at least, was like a huge monopoly chain in the area (like Wal-Mart). “At Junes, every day is Customer Appreciation Day. Come see for yourself, and get in touch with our products! Every day’s great at your Junes!” “Every day’s great at your Junes!” repeated Rain, in a lyrical manner. They finished their dinner in peace, talking about several things. Feez got to know Rain a little bit better… At night, Feez went up to the room Rock had lent him. He was tired…it would be best to sleep early. He went over to his futon, jumped onto it, and quickly went into a deep sleep. …… … He was running across an endless hallway with a sword in hand. The area was consumed with an incredibly thick fog. Why he was running and why he had a weapon he did know. He just knew he did. He heard a voice; “If you seek the truth, come on ahead.” The hallway suddenly came to an end with a door; Feez opened it. Inside was…something. He did not know what. “Try all you like…” echoed the voice. However, Feez suddenly brought his hands to the air and crushed something. Something popped out of whatever was crushed; it was as if it had been summoned. The Thing lashed forward and began attacking the something “It seems you do possess a special ability,” echoed the voice again. “However…” The fog began to thicken. “It will take you longer to reveal the truth. Whether you can or not will depend…I look forward to it.” …. … The dream had ended. Feez woke up suddenly. It was morning; he started school today. He got up, got ready, and went downstairs. Rain was cooking breakfast. “Oh, you’re up!? Dad’s still not home…he’s probably still at work. I hope everything’s alright.” They ate in silence. Afterwards, they walked together to school. Rain showed Feez the direction to his high school and then sped off towards her own school. Feez was about to enter the school gates when he noticed a guy riding a bicycle in a rather odd fashion. It was almost like he barely had any control over it. He slammed against a trashcan and fell over. “Fuuck..shiittt…ughhh!” groaned the guy. “Wow, what a loser,” said Feez under his breath, ignoring the pained student. Classroom 2-2. Several students were talking to each other about various things. Some were talking about a certain Mr. Laharl, others talking about some kind of accident. It was just general school murmur. “Hey guys, I heard there’s going to be a transfer student!” “Huh, really?” Three students, a guy and two girls, were sitting next to each other. They found this news rather interesting. “A transfer student, eh?” said one of the girls with short hair. “Just like you, right PZ?” “FUUUCK MY KNEE. FUUUCK MY BIKE. FUUUUUCK.” “What’s with him?” “No idea,” answered the other girl. This one hand long black hair. Suddenly, a very ugly figure walked into the room. “AIGHT YOU NIGGAZ. MY NAME IS KING LAHARL AND I AM YOUR HOMEROOM TEACHER. YOU NIGGAZ THINK YOU’RE HOT SHOTS OR SOME SHIT, BUT IMMA GONNA MAKE YOU COOL LIKE ME. YEAAH. ALSO, WE HAVE A FUCKING TRANSFER STUDENT FROM THE CITY. HE PROBABLY SUCKS DICK BECAUSE THE CITY SUCKS DICK AND HE ALSO PROBABLY IS A LOOOOSEEER! NOW INTRODUCE YOURSELF YOU LIL’ BITCH.” [ ] The name’s Feez. Feezus Christ. [ ] Hello, nice to meet you  [x] Yo, you fucking goddamn failure of a human being, did you just call me a loser? Don’t tell me you did, because if you did, somebody gonna get a hurt real bad. Real bad. Feez suddenly felt his courage increase tremendously. Everyone in the class was startled. This Feez must be a God or something to stand up to Laharl, the most gigantic faggot ever. “You…fucking piece of shit!” yelled Laharl. “Fuck you! FUUU—“ “Uh, sir?” said one of the girls who had been talking to PZ earlier. “Can he sit here?” she asked, indicating the empty seat next to her. “Huh? Yeah, you hear that you fucking transfer student? Go sit there.” “Okay,” responded Feez, rather calmly. He walked over to the girl and sat down next to her. “He’s the worst, isn’t he?” she asked. “Yep. The worst faggot,” responded Feez. Feez could hear several students talking about him from all around the class. They were feeling sorry for him; apparently this King Laharl was the worst homeroom teacher ever. King Laharl began talking about a lot of random crap that Feez thought was useless. He talked and talked for over 9000 hours. “Alright, that’s all for today I guess,” said King Laharl. He was about to pick up his bag and leave when suddenly the school intercom rang; “ATTENTION ALL TEACHERS. PLEASE REPORT IMMEDIATELY TO THE FACULTY OFFICE. ALL STUDENTS, DO NOT LEAVE YOUR CLASSROOMS FOR ANY REASON.” “Well. You heard that shit, you worthless fags,” said King Laharl. “Don’t any of you move.” He ran out of the room. Feez could hear sirens from outside. Was the police outside? Had there been an accident? He could hear students talking amongst themselves. Some of them were crowing around the window. “Man, what’s going on? I can’t see anything outside. Frickin’ fog…” “Yeah, like every time it rains, a huge ass fog follows. Tell me about it…” “Yo, did you hear the police is looking all over for that one announcer? Lara-su Echidna.” “What, really? I heard that she was…” “REALLY?” One of the boys walked from the window and headed towards the long black-haired girl. "H-hey, Kazyen, is it true that that one announcer, Lara-su Echidna, was staying at your family’s inn?" “…I have no comment,” replied Kazyen. “Yeah, thought so…” replied the boy. The short-haired girl walked up to Kazyen. “Man, how much longer is this going to take?” “No idea, Tiara.” “Hmm…hey! Did you try that thing I told you about?” “Huh?” “You know…about the rainy nights!?” “Oh…no, not yet. Sorry Tiara.” Just then, the school intercom spoke again; “ATTENTION ALL STUDENTS. THERE HAS BEEN AN INCIDENT INSIDE THE SCHOOL DISTRICT. POLICE OFFICERS HAVE BEEN DISPATCHED AROUND THE SCHOOL ZONE. PLEASE STAY CALM AND QUICKLY LEAVE THE SCHOOL GROUNDS. DO NOT DISTURB THE POLICE OFFICERS AND IMMEDIATELY GO HOME!” “Incident?” “What happened?” Feez got up, intending on heading home. Just then Tiara and Kazyen walked up to him. “Heey,” said Tiara. “You gonna go home? Why don’t you walk with us? The name’s Tiara, and this here is Kazyen. I sit next to you!” Feez nodded. “Nice to meet you two.” “Nice to meet you,” said Kazyen, smiling. They were about to head out of the classroom, when they were stopped by PZ. “Dude. Dude.” “What?” asked Tiara, annoyed. “Dude, man. Dude.” “WHAAAT?” “DUDE. HOLY DUDE.” “…” “This movie. It was incredible, Tiara! B-but…dude. Dude, man, sorry.” PZ quickly thrusted the DVD into Tiara’s hands and tried to run away. However, Tiara, who was rather skilled in the martial arts, caught him. “What did you do to my DVD!” she yelled, kicking him in the crotch. “OH MY GOD IT’S ALL CRACKED. MY…SOJAZILLA! IT’S ALL CRACKED! “Fuck, oh my god, I am dying here,” said PZ, in obvious pain. “Screw you!” yelled Tiara. She and Kazyen walked out. Feez ignored PZ and walked out as well. They walked outside of the school grounds, when they were suddenly confronted by a random guy. “You’re…Kaz, right?” asked the boy. “W-what? What do you want?” asked Kazyen. “Wanna go out with me?” he asked. “What!?” Suddenly, a bunch of students who were in the area became interested. “Did that guy seriously just ask out the most popular girl in the whole school? Not only that, he called her “Kaz”. Wow!” “No,” replied Kazyen, quite blank about it. “FINE, GEEZ!” yelled the boy, and he ran off. “What…was that about?” asked Kazyen, confused. “Well, he was asking you out on a date,” replied Tiara. “…” “But…to be honest, there was definitely something creepy about that guy.” Just then, PZ came out with his damaged bike. “Sup guys, sup. Well, looks like Kazyen turned down another guy. Cool story sis, cool story. Anyways, cya’ll later!” PZ got on his bike and rode away. “That guy just said “cool story!””, said Feez to himself. The three of them walked together. Feez filled them in on why he had transferred here from the big city. “So, you moved here because of your parents’ job?” asked Tiara. “Sounds rough man. Well! Can’t do much about it. There really isn’t anything in Inaba though. Well, I guess there is the Amagi Inn, which Kazyen’s family runs.” “Huh?” Kazyen was startled. “It’s really nothing but an old inn…” “Ohh, no way, it’s the Pride of Inaba after all! It’s been around for generations man!” “So…tell me, you think Kazyen’s cute, right?” asked Tiara, all of a sudden, in a different voice. [ ] Yeah, she’s fucking hot. [ ] I would fuck her all night just like every other person on FEFF. [x] Nah, I have higher standards, nah mean? “Hahaha, good one. You took that question better than PZ did back when he first transferred!” “Come on, Tiara, not this again…” said Kazyen, disgruntled. “She’s really popular, but never has had a boyfriend. Everyone worships her though.” Kazyen just ignored this last comment. Suddenly, Tiara noticed a crowd gathering near them. “Hey, what’s that?” They walked towards it. People were speaking in hushed voices. “Wow, who could imagine such a thing hanging from an antenna!?” “It was terrifying. I can’t believe a dead body was hanging from there.” “Wait, what?” said Tiara. “Did she just say dead body?” Rock emerged from the crowd. He noticed Feez and walked towards him. “Hey, what’re you doing here at this hour?!” “Nothing, just walking home.” “Figured as much…” “You know this guy?” asked Tiara. “I’m Detective Rock, Feez’s uncle and current guardian. Heh, I hope you girls get along with him. But you guys should go straight home!” Suddenly a young officer ran towards a field and threw up, disgusted. “Greth! How long are you gonna act like a fucking rookie! You want me to send you out of here?!” “S-sorry,” said Greth, the young officer. “Go wash your face, dammit! We gotta go and get some more information!” Rock and Greth ran off. “…was this what that announcement at school was about?” wondered Tiara. “A dead body hanging on an antenna? For real?!” “I can’t believe it,” remarked Kazyen. “Yeah…let’s go home, guys,” said Feez. “G-good idea!” replied Tiara, scared. She and Kazyen ran off. ***** That night, Feez and Rain were watching the news on TV. Rock still hadn’t come home…he was most likely still busy with work. “Around noon today, a woman was found dead near the Samegawa River in Inaba. The deceased has been identified as Lara-su Echidna, as revealed by the Inaba Police Department.” “The Inaba Police Department is where Dad works!” yelled Rain. “The body was found hanging on an antenna near a civilian’s house’s roof.. Why the body was found in such a state is unknown. The police are still investigating whether this was a suicide or homicide incident. A thick fog common to the are has slowed their progress, and further plans may or may not be delayed due to it.” “That’s scary…” said Rain. She changed the channel to a Junes commercial. “Every day’s great at your Junes!” “Every day’s great at your Junes!” mimicked Rain. “Cool song sis,” replied Feez. Rain seemed to be lost in her song. Feez decided to let her be and go back to his room. So, it seems a murder had taken place. What did this mean? Who was the culprit? What was going on? Why did it all start when he came? And what was up with all the dreams he had been having lately? Tired as hell, he decided to go to sleep and see what tomorrow had in store for him. Edited by Feez, Jan 10 2009, 08:37 PM.
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| Rin | Jan 5 2009, 01:54 AM Post #9 |
TOTALLY A MAN
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Did I just get massive spoilers? Awesome though. Keep going. |
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| Sentenal | Jan 5 2009, 02:15 AM Post #10 |
When you can't make them see the light, make them feel the heat.
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Most of this stuff is probably just intro stuff, that you would find out in the first 15 minutes of playing it anyway. Long chapter lol. But it was good. Needs to be shorter for an easier read imo |
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| Ryotaro Dojima | Jan 5 2009, 12:24 PM Post #11 |
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Easier read Sent? it was only so long because he spaced it well. But yeah that's the intro you kinda just let that go by. Of course that's why you shouldn't leave the forum, when a cool fic comes along you miss out XD. |
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| Tiaro | Jan 5 2009, 12:39 PM Post #12 |
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Cool story bro. x3 |
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| +Hollie | Jan 5 2009, 06:48 PM Post #13 |
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Not bad. I liked.
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Known as Haar on Brand of Flame. Bitch. Formerly Margaret Thatcher, Aleksandr | |
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| Kazyen | Jan 5 2009, 10:16 PM Post #14 |
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haha awesome, good job Feez |
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| PhantomZero | Jan 6 2009, 05:44 PM Post #15 |
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Chapter 2 – The Midnight Channel The next day as Feez was walking to school, he saw PZ speed past him on his bike and crash into a trashcan. PZ was stuck in the trashcan. Feez was lolin’. “Someone…help…!!” said a muffled voice from the trashcan. Feez, being the nice guy he was, grabbed PZ’s legs and pulled him out of the mess. “Oh man, thanks!” said PZ, brushing the dirt off him and picking his bike back up. “Hey, you’re that new transfer student, Feez, right?” “Yep. You okay?” “Yeah. Hey, did you hear about the incident yesterday? That Lara-su whatever lady was found hanging from an antenna or some shit. There’s no way that was purely an accident.” “It was probably a murder,” said Feez. “Yeah, I bet some sick fuck decided to hang her body like that….shit, we’re gonna be late for school at this rate!” yelled PZ, glancing at his watch. “You want a ride?” he asked, pointing at the back of his bike. “Uhhh..” Feez wasn’t sure he wanted to ride behind a dude on a small bike like that. “It’s okay; this is our first step towards ultimate brodom.” “OKAY!” “ARRIGHT!” Feez jumped onto the bike and the bros sped off. ***** At school, King Laharl was once again lecturing about random shit that nobody cared about. He talked about stuff like how he was really cool and how all high school students sucked. However, even though Feez knew this lecture was completely useless and that King Laharl was a complete moron, he felt his knowledge drastically increase. Perhaps learning from idiots about idiotic things was a means of learning as well. Or well, learning about how stupid idiots are so it’s easier to make fun of them. After school, PZ walked over to Feez. “’Sup dude?” “Not much. Just kind of getting used to this place.” “Yeah there isn’t much to do here compared to the city. But Inaba does have clean air, and it’s nice and quiet I suppose. Oh yeah, and we have great steak. I know a place that we can get it for cheap. Wanna come? I’ll spot you,” said PZ, winking. “Sur—“ “Woah, woah, woaaaah!” butted in Tiara. “What about me, “bro”? “What about you?” “Dude, you messed up my amazing Sojazilla DVD! YOU MUST PAY BY FEEDING ME YUMMY STEAK!” “Dude. Okay, I get it.” “Yeah! Doesn’t that sound great, Kaz?” asked Tiara to Kazyen, who was packing her bags near them. “Oh…well, no, I have to help out at the inn today so I’ll have to pass,” she said with an obviously forced smile on her face. She quickly walked out of the classroom. “Oh well,” said Tiara, shrugging. “Let’s get going then.” “You little bitch…making me treat two people…” said PZ, under his breath, as the three headed off. ***** Junes, food court… “This is the amazing place you were talking about?” asked Tiara. “This place doesn’t even have steak!” “Yeah, well, once you decided to come I had to change my plans. Because only bros with bros can eat steak together like bros.” “What’s that supposed to mean!?” “Nothing.” “Anyways, we just came here because it’s your place.” “Dude, this isn’t my place or anything. It’s my dad’s. This location opened up about six months back and my dad was assigned to manage it. That’s why our whole family moved.” “My little cousin likes that one Junes song,” said Feez, suddenly remembering BloodRain’s constant singing. “Oh yeah? Well I guess it does attract a lot of customers here. I hate to say it but we’re almost like a monopoly around here.” PZ had some drinks and fries with him and handed them to the other two. “Welcome to Inaba, Feez,” said PZ. “You’re right, though,” said Tiara, taking a sip. “A lot of stores in the shopping district have already closed down in those 6 months…” “Well, you can’t blame it all on Junes….*sigh*” Just then PZ turned his head and noticed a girl sitting on the other side of the food court. “Hey, it’s Sara-senpai! Be right back guys,” said PZ, ecstatic, as we walked off. [ ] Who’s Sara? [ ] Is Sara PZ’s girlfriend? [x] Hey let’s move a bit closer so we can overhear their conversation. “Hey, good idea!” said Tiara. “Well, Sara’s family runs a liquor store in the shopping district. She works here part-time from what I can gather…” Feez and Tiara moved to a closer table so that they could overhear the conversation. “Hey Sara-senpai, what’s up?” “Heyy, not much PZ. Finally on break. Bringing your friends here to boost the family business?” There was something fishy about the way she said that. Or maybe only Feez thought so. “You look down. Did something happen?” asked PZ. “No…just a bit tired. I shouldn’t have left school early yesterday…” “Huh? Well if you ever need to talk, I’m always willing to listen…” Sara chuckled, “No really, I’m fine. Thanks though.” She looked around and noticed Feez. “Hey, is he the new transfer student?!” She got up and walked over to their table. PZ followed. “Hey, you the new transfer student?” Feez nodded. “Haha, PZ must have already told you about me. It must be nice to have someone else from the big city to talk to, right?” “Sure.” “Yeah, I don’t see him hanging out with many of the other guys around. I guess he doesn’t have too many friends,” said Sara, teasingly. “H-hey!” “Yeah, also he can get annoying sometimes so you gotta tell him that whenever he does.” [ ] Yeah he’s an annoying faggot. [x] We are on a journey towards brodom. If he becomes annoying I’ll have to set him straight. [ ] Nah, he’s cool. “Haha, I was just joking. Anyway…my break’s over. Gotta get back to work.” She said goodbye to them all and headed back inside the store. “Heh, Sara-senpai can get annoying sometimes herself. She has a little brother who she teases a lot…she kind of treats me the same way.” “OOhHhOHohHH I SEE how it is. HMMMM,” said Tiara all of a sudden. “You don’t want her treating you like a little brother eh?” “Dude, it’s not…like that,” said PZ, blushing. “Well, I know how to heal your wounded heart, Mr. You ever hear of the Midnight Channel?” “Huh? What’s that?” “You’re supposed to look into a TV that’s switch off, alone, exactly at midnight on a rainy night. While you’re staring at your own image, another person will appear on the screen. And they say that person’s your soul mate.” She said this all with a mysterious voice. “What? Sounds like a bunch of bogus to me.” “You don’t believe me, huh? Well, it’s going to rain tonight. Why don’t we all try it out. THEN we’ll see what’s bogus.” “Dude. This sounds stupid. But all that aside, you guys know about that incident yesterday right? Wonder who the culprit is…” “Way to get off the original subject! All I’m saying is that you guys better try that Midnight Channel thing tonight." ***** That night… Rock had finally come home and was eating dinner with Rain and Feez. “Hey Rain, can you put on the news for me?” She turned the TV on. “Next, more details in the developing story on the incident in foggy Inaba. Announcer Lara-su Echidna’s dead body was found hanging above a house in this isolate rural town. It is confirmed that Ms. Echidna had been involved in an affair with Sentenal, husband of enka singer Sexy Protoss Bitch.” It was nothing more than a follow-up report about yesterday’s murder. Could the incident had been tied up to the lovers’ quarrels? “The police plan to investigate this relationship and question any personnel involved with them. In addition, we now bring you an exclusive interview with the local student who found Ms. Echidna’s body.” “What? An interview with the kid...?” asked Rock, dumstruck. “What went through your mind when you saw it? Could you tell she was dead? Did you see her face?” “Ummm...” said a familiar voice. The figure of the girl was faded out and could barely be seen. “Could you tell she was dead?” “What…she was killed?” replied the girl. “Err…did you see anyone suspicious around here?” “No, not really.” “We heard that you found it when you left school early. Did you have some personal business to take care of?” “W-what?” Feez took another closer look at the shaded figure. It reminded him of Sara, the girl PZ had been talking to earlier at the Junes food court… “Well, that’s all for the interview folks.” Sara left from the screen. “A bizarre case, isn’t it folks? Hanging someone upside from an antenna. I’d have to say it’s a warning or a sign from the culprit! Unfortunately…no one has come forward to take credit for the crime.” “Loads of prank calls, though,” murmured Rock. Commercials started to play. “At Junes, every day is Customer Appreciation Day. Come see for yourself, and get in touch with our products! Every day’s great at your Junes!” “Every day’s great at your Junes!” mimicked Rain. “Hey Dad, let’s go to Junes together some time.” “….” “No?” “zzz.” It seems Rock had gone to sleep. Letting him be, Feez said g’night to Rain and decided to go back up to his room. ***** It was almost midnight. Feez looked out his window and could see thick rain drops falling. The conditions were right and the stage was set. He walked over to his TV just a few seconds before 12 AM. He peered at the TV for several seconds, but nothing came on. “Heh, just another silly folklore,” said Feez, as he turned his back. Suddenly, however, a light began showing from the TV. “What…?” He could hear music coming from it. His heart began to beat. He saw images of a girl. Several still images. He heard a voice echoing through his head. “I am thou. And thou art I.” Feez stepped back and kneeled, clenching his forehead. “Thou art the one who opens the door.” The ringing in his head stopped and the light from the TV vanished. He got back up and just stared at the TV again for countless minutes. However, all he could see was just his reflection. He didn’t know why, but for some reason Feez began to walk forward towards the TV. He almost instinctively put his hand on the screen, and his hand went through it! It was as if he was being sucked in. “A-aaaah!” His arm was stuck in the TV. Using all his brute force, he dragged it back out and fell on his head. “Are you okay?” he could hear Rain’s voice from the other room. “Y-yeah!” “Mmm…okay!” ***** After school, the next day… People were talking about the murder from the other day. Lots of rumors were going around. PZ walked up to Feez. “Yo.” “Yo.” “Umm…well, it’s not really that important, but you know that thing Tiara told us about? Well…yesterday on TV I…” He scratched his head. “Oh never mind, I’ll tell you later.” Tiara walked up to them. “Hey, PZ you hear the rumor? Apparently Sara-senpai’s the one who found the dead body.” “Maybe that’s why she looked so down. I didn’t see her at school today either…” Just then Kazyen, who had been packing her bags near them, got up intending to leave. “Huh? Oh Kaz, you helping out at the inn today too?” asked Tiara. “Yeah…things are pretty hectic over there right now…I’m sorry.” She walked out. “Dude, is it just me or does Kazyen seem really stressed out lately?” wondered PZ. [ ] Maybe she got raped and doesn’t know what to do now. [ ] Maybe something’s going on at the inn? [x] Maybe HI_alchemist sent her a love note. “HAHA, good one,” said PZ, chuckling. Tiara sighed. “Oh!” she screamed, as if she had suddenly remembered something. “Did you guys see…it…last night?” “Huh?” replied PZ. “Oh…well, what about you?” “I did. I seriously truly saw a girl. Does that mean my soul mate is a girl? Not sure who it was though, but hair was definitely brown.” “Dude, I think we saw the same person. The image was a bit blurry, but…” “You saw it too? Does that mean we have the same soul mate?” “I don’t know!” “Well, how about you?” Tiara asked Feez. Feez thought it was necessary to relieve some of the tension. “I saw her too… So…” [ ] Are you sure it wasn’t just some weird TV show? [ ] This rumor has to be fake. [x] Foursome? PZ laughed but Tiara shot Feez a glare. “Be serious dammit!” Feez told them everything that happened to him last night. “So we all saw the same person, but…weird voices? Getting sucked into your TV? The hell?” PZ was startled. “You were probably just really tired man.” “Must’ve been a pretty interesting dream,” said Tiara, chuckling. “Maybe if the TV had been bigger you would’ve been sucked all the way in. And…speaking of TVs, our family’s been talking about buying a bigger one lately.” “Oh yeah? Well, Junes sure does have a lot of ‘em, wanna check it out? We always have the best stuff, including electronics and whatnot. We recently even got a new stock of flatscreen TVs,” said PZ, matter-of-factly. “Sure! Let’s go. I only really want a new TV so I can watch my kung-fu movies in high quality. WA-TAAA! ATAAA! HYAA!” screamed Tiara, posing some cool moves. ***** Junes, electronics department… Feez, Tiara, and PZ were looking at a huge TV. “Wow, this is huge!” said Tiara. “But…look at the price of that thing. Ridiculous~!” “Well, I guess only those rich folk buy things like this.” “Yeah, I suppose. Oh well.” They both looked at each other really quickly and then walked forward and touched the screen. Nothing happened. “Haha, didn’t think it’d work,” said PZ. “Figures.” “I guess it was just a dream, Feez,” said Tiara. “So Tiara, what’s your family’s budget?” “Show me something that’s cheap.” They walked a little to the side to another TV. “Here’s another model we recently got. A downgrade from that other one, but definitely affordable for people who make no money because they’re too lazy to go get off their asses and work.” “Dude, this isn’t cheap at all PZ!” said Tiara. “And my family isn’t lazy! Not everyone makes a lot of money.” “Sorry, I didn’t know what your version of ‘cheap’ was.” The conversation between the two continued. Feez just stood there watching. He looked at the big TV again. What if…he tried to go in? Was it really a dream? He walked forward and put his hand on the screen. It went through! His hand was stuck inside the screen! “Oh yeah, yeah you told me about that movie. Let me borrow it some time. No, no I won’t break it. I pro—“ ”HOLY MOTHERFUCKING SHIT WHAT THE FUCK!” yelled PZ all of a sudden, as he had just taken note of Feez. Tiara looked too. “Wh-whaaat!?!? WOAH. WHAT IS GOING ON HERE!” They ran towards Feez. “You got to be kidding me. It wasn’t a dream?” asked Tiara. “Why would I tell you about it if it was a dream? I don’t usually dream you silly niggers,” said Feez. “Oh man, oh man!” yelled PZ. Feez, feeling brave, put his head inside the TV. It went through! “OH MY GOD!” yelled Tiara. “Dude, there’s like empty space inside!” yelled Feez. “What? You serious!?!” “It’s pretty spacious too guys!” yelled Feez, again. “W-what? What’s pretty spaci—I mean, what’s going on here!” said Tiara. “FUCKFUCK I GOTTA PEE!” yelled PZ, jumping up and down. “Are you gonna pee in your pants or something!?” “I’ve been holding it all day. I can’t hold…it…anymore…!!! AAHHAHRHBURNAN” PZ ran towards the bathroom, but a split second later he came back. “Shit! Customers are coming!” “What?!” yelled Tiara. “But we guy this stupid idiot here half-stuck inside a TV!” “What’re we gonna do!?” They both begin running around in random directions for some reason unexplainable by even the authors of this fanfiction. The bumped each other, and then both bumped into Feez’s ass. Yeah, they all fell in. “What the? Wait, Wooooooooah!” It was as if they were falling down a huge pit or hole of some sort. It was…an interesting experience to say the least. What lay ahead of them? What was inside this mysterious TV world? Edited by Soji Seta, Jan 10 2009, 08:38 PM.
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