Writing Contest 01

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Writing Contest 01; Prompt -- "A murder"
Topic Started: Mar 13 2009, 04:40 PM (339 Views)
+Hollie	Mar 23 2009, 02:38 PM Post #16
Resident Brit Posts: 6,829 Group: Advisor Member #801 Joined: May 19, 2006	Voting for yourself: Why the hell not. Go ahead. Voting for one: Why the hell not. Go ahead.
	MSN Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: "Be good, because if you're not, Arick will come down that chimney instead of Santa, and instead of toys he has choloroform, a hacksaw, and a burlap sack." MSN... again Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: I'm a horrible rolemodel. H乜骏 says: I'll take extra care not to blow my neighbourhood up, I promise Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: Also don't jam forks in strange orifices. Wirtjr, Speaker for the Dead says: ...Wait, that didn't come out right Known as Haar on Brand of Flame. Bitch. Formerly Margaret Thatcher, Aleksandr


Kamaitachi	Mar 24 2009, 06:32 PM Post #17
Classy Posts: 5,258 Group: Judge Member #613 Joined: February 13, 2006	Um, D B C A was just a crock of shit. Whoever that writer is should be shot. B was nicely worded and simply put. I liked the concept of Judas' sin. C a masterpiece in topic. Oddly written with strange grammatical and syntax combinations. D elegant and poetic, the images were just lovely, even if at times they were a bit forced. E has a mishmash of ideas. It's not something that looks like it should be so short. The whole thing appears to be exposition with action. This could use some work.
	Quote: H乜骏 says: Pure genius. H乜骏 says: Well. 72% genius, 28% alcohol.


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