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Moushin Honoka; One whom seeks silence
Topic Started: Jul 5 2009, 04:45 PM (80 Views)
Scythe
Human:
Name: Moushin Honoka
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Description: Honoka may, at some point, have been attractive, but a failure to take care of herself has left her looking rather ragged. Her black hair tends to hang down over her face, down past her shoulders, tangled and knotted from the minimal attention given to it. Beneath her twisted hair lies a face with sunken eyes, features worn and scratched, twisted in their own way from self abuse and malnutrition. More than anything, that is the mark she bears upon her, the appearance of one who has completely and utterly failed to maintain their own body, her skin showing slight discoloration, her form thin, though she is rarely unclean. Her eyes are strange, seeming to, at first glance, lack irises, instead having a larger pupil with strange black flecks around it. Closer inspection reveals that her iris is inexplicably black, and its edges are tattered and uneven, giving the appearance of the black specks and shards around her iris. She is about five and a half feet in height, though she usually slouches slightly.

She tends to wear very similar garments on a day to day basis. She often wears sunglasses and carries a slightly tattered, black parasol, always in her right hand, as bright lights bother her, and direct sun generally makes her uncomfortable. She tends to wear light, white T-shirts with no decoration, and blue jean shorts, generally regardless of the weather, with black sandals. She also wears a heavy, black glove, always on her left hand, over her Hunter VG, a line running up her arm to an ear bud.

Personality: Honoka is incredibly unstable, moments of true lucidity coming to her only rarely. She obsesses about being in Converted form, tending to find the physical world uncomfortable, unfamiliar. She frequently has trouble recognizing things as what they are, trouble focusing on whats around her. Worst of all, for her, is that almost regardless of the object, regardless of the thing she mulls over, her mind inevitably turns to destruction. Some yearning deep inside to break, to smash, to shatter everything, Only by regularly thinking about other things, only by failing to focus can she remain even functionally sane.

One exception to her psychosis is her Hunter VG and Leopard who resides within. While she has stopped referring to him by his name, instead simply referring to him as her 'Blade,' she considers him an extension of herself, a vital part of herself, and she makes sure she always has a direct connection to him, attempting to take 'him' away from her is apt to draw absolute, murderous rage, followed by a rapid spiral into relatively destructive depression if access to him, and her Wave Conversion, is continued to be denied.

She is given to periodic bouts of laughter as things 'make sense' to her. Living in such uncertainty, such mental chaos, things that make sense to her almost inevitably strike her as immensely funny, as everything, even for a moment, clicks into place. She tends to connect poorly with others, having trouble interacting with anyone in the flesh, other than talking to Leopard.

Biography: Everyone, these days, knows about the interference, the horrible Noise that had driven so many Wizards and aliens mad, into a berserk frenzy, but most do not know, what most never noticed, was the effect it had on a young woman. She was a prodigy, a young researcher driven to test and experiment with the growing Wizard technology, interested in the Wave, the Aliens, cards, and all to do with the new world that was becoming available to everyone. Her primary course of study was Card development and production, and she spent many long hours in Wave Conversion, aided by her Wizard Leopard, testing, experimenting, getting to better understand the inner workings of the very basic weapons Wave Warriors could use against viruses.

She had a bright career ahead of her... Before the beam was fired. Before her world was consumed in noise.

Honoka was in the middle of an experiment when the ray struck WAXA, and the interference, the noise rushed over, rushed through her. Unlike in so many other cases, her Wizard remained secure, functional, and it was the human half that was wracked with the chaos, the derangement brought on by the chaotic pulse. Their form corrupted, seeming to be possibly fatally damaged, she managed to escape the Wave, but it was too late, far too late. Worse, still, it seemed the fused form had actually aided her sanity, alone, unconverted it was even harder for her to think straight, harder for her to resist the berserk impulse.

She has retreated from the world slowly, parts of her life just folding up, vanishing as she spends more and more time in Wave Conversion, more and more time trying to escape, even a little, the chaos of her mind.

Wizard:
Name: Leopard "Blade"
Gender: Male
Description: Leopard's basic appearance is that of a large, black cube, apparently of segmented metal parts. Red crystalline eyes appear floating at his 'front' though they tend to swivel rapidly whenever something catches his attention.

Personality: Leopard is fanatically loyal to Honoka, ever since the incident, he is quite happy to have not gone violently insane, but at the same time feels that it would be better had it happened to him, rather than her. Because of this he talks straight, works smoothly, and complies with anything she wants or needs, always being on attention for her, trying to help her survive.

Biography: Leopard used to be a rather boastful and over-eager Wizard, quite full of himself, and glad to be part of Honoka's work trying to develop new and cutting edge Cards, even as she was just starting in on her college classes on the subject. Up until the accident he was generally blue colored, switching red when feeling particularly excitable, but he changed as his mistress did, though not because of some external force, other than his coloration, but because it simply was what he had to do to help keep her even semi-functional and occasionally stable.

Wave Conversion
 
Name: Kakeru
Element: Dark
Sub Element: Shadow
Gender: Female
Description: Kakeru is a wild figure to behold. Dark static seems to constantly emanate from her, as though she was constantly falling apart, her edges tearing themselves apart, her entire form consumed in small signs of self destruction. Other than the emanations, though, her form is exceedingly human, almost identical to Hanoka's human neck and face, though much healthier, her hair well taken care of and carefully trimmed. Her eyes, however, are simply worse in this form, almost completely black planes, run through with jagged lines of white that stretch out from around her pupil.

Her upper body seems to be wearing rather carefully fit, black plated armor, with what looks to be a rigid shirt collar extending up next to her neck, curved, blade like shoulder guards extending over her arms, though her arms are otherwise human, and bare, except for a jagged looking black gauntlet on her left hand. The armor continues to extend down, her lower legs seeming to be encased in carefully segmented, and little decorated plates, except for a curved protrusion extending up from each knee, and a row of overlapping, spiked extensions extending from the ankle of her boot up along her shin.

Weapon 1 Name:Noise
Weapon 1 Attack:Kakeru's main weapon is a burst of the very chaos that so damaged her to begin with. Generally speaking it is released with a hand gesture, but a scream, or laughter are also acceptable triggers to release a burst of the destabilizing fragments from her.

This has three functional forms, a dissociated blast that expands outwards in an unfocused cone, out to mid range, about four meters in length and approximately seven meters in width at the end, dealing Moderate damage. The second is a long range, focused beam, which also does Moderate damage, but shoots straight through obstacles and navis and so on, piercing and damaging each object along the line. She can also attempt to control it, which forms a short range storm of noise with low range, capable of forming it in front of her within about three meters, and she may cause it to drift another three meters after it has been created. It can inflict multiple hits of Pathetic damage to anyone caught in it. Those who are sized immediately within its area can take up to 8 hits, if struck immediately, 3-4 to those who are caught by it later. Due to the intense concentration this requires she is incapable of using this version of the attack on consecutive rounds.

Weapon 2 Name:Dissociative State
Weapon 2 Attack: Kakeru is far less together than most other Converted forms, but can take advantage of this unstable nature, breaking apart completely into an indeterminate wave of crackling static, which moves rapidly to a chosen destination within about twelve feet and reforms. She may only move in a straight line in this form, and may not end a post still in it. Anyone who passes through the static, or whom the static passes around, takes Low damage, additionally, as it is functionally without form, most attack pass harmlessly though the cloud. Using this ability more frequently than once every seven rounds will cause her to take Modest damage from failing to completely restabalize, and she is simply incapable of using it more than once every three rounds, as her form needs to finish drawing itself together before it can pull itself apart once more.
Edited by Scythe, Jul 5 2009, 11:08 PM.


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General profile comments that I can't help but point out. Don't take these personally, and don't think this makes your profile any less well made. (You can skip this if you'd like XD)
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To start, you have a well made character. Good detailed descriptions, and an interesting and different personality. I really appreciate that you took some time into this and thought out your character's history. I'm even glad that you read the storyline that we've got here. Uh...however...you're going to need to change some things around.

Star Force 3 came out a week ago, and I just now beat it. I know the full storyline now, and what we currently have under the storyline here is way off. <_<; I apologize, but Meteor G never crashed into earth. It was destroyed before it could be. We wrote that story up in December based on the information that we knew, and there was just a bunch of miscommunication about what really happened. I'm sorry, but you're going to need to edit that part of your profile. Otherwise, I'm glad you've read over the rules (it seems thats becoming a less and less common thing around here).

If you want to make minimal changes to your profile, I have a suggestion, but its a spoiler if you haven't played SF3.
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Other than that, you just have a little things to fix for your weapons. (I might be leaving some stuff out)

Noise: The controlled option for this attack needs to be a little more specific. Does it work in a concentrated beam, or is it similar to the wider range version of the attack? I think you mean to say it works sort of as a cloud, but I'd like for this to be cleared up first.

Dissociative State: How far is the teleportation range?

Once again, I'm sorry about the miscommunication about the meteor crashing. Its not a very good impression on our part to have our first post be that we screwed up <_<;
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Weapon is overpowered. I agree with all of what Omega says, but the following are my suggestions to make it less...overpowered/clarifications.

1)Noise-
How large does the cone expand to?
You can't have a Piercing effect with your weapon. THat falls under a totallly different element than either Dark or Shadow.
How many hits is 'multiple'?
On top of that, having 3 modes to a weapon is a bit of a stretch. If other staffs members give the OK, I won't veto, but I'm not happy with it. =/

Dissociative whatever- You need a cooldown to how often you can use it, ( I think the norm was 5) a maximum distance, and you shouldn't be allowed to damage others while in the form.


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Okay, rules stuff first, since that will take less time to go over.

Concentrated beam was meant to be quite thin, direct laser sort of thing, and by 'piercing' I meant the shockwave effect, like from the BN Mettaur chips, hits something, keeps going along the line, I didn't think that was elementally associated.

I imagined teleportation range would be moderate, but again, what qualifies as 'moderate' I am uncertain of for the forum. I'll certainly add a cool down if it's needed, but the damaging nature was part of the flavor, is it a large problem?

As for the cone size, I don't know what's reasonable, ditto for the number of hits on the 'controlled' attack. I figured the controlled attack would function similarly to the tornado/static chips of BN, though with a little more drift to it.


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Beam thing < - Fine.
Teleportation Range <- Usually 5 feet.
Controlled attack < - Tornado was around 8 hits, i think
Cone size < - I really have no idea. =/


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Scythe
Okay, I've added a cool down, and details for most of them, but on the 'teleport' it's not... Properly supposed to be a teleport, as while it is quick, it is nowhere near instantaneous. It does not let her reach a location any more rapidly than if she was running to it, nor does her crackling form permit her to do so without being easily observed and traced. The advantage of it is that she can move through otherwise solid things, such a her opponents, and evade attacks while doing so, but as the primary intent is mobility I would be preferential to a 12-20 ft range (4-6 panels) so it can actually preform as such.


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On top of that, having 3 modes to a weapon is a bit of a stretch.

Awww. I was thinking about making my next weapon have 6 interchangeable attacks (with proper drawbacks, mind you). I think what she has here is fine actually. They don't vary a whole lot, and there aren't a million different things she can do with it. Plus, as a loophole, its her weapon (as stated in every profile sheet), so more attacks can be listed despite the weapon (But thats just my take on it).

As for the Cone's width and range, I'd say it can be as tall as an EM Being (About 7 feet) with a range of something like 5-7 feet maybe? Its really up to you what you would like. We can just tell you to change it if we think its too much.

The main issue with your second attack (technically weapon) is that you essentially have an auto evade. It might not be fast or give you a stealth advantage, but dodging is essentially done with a little too much ease. The drawbacks you have seem like they're fine, but I'm leaning more toward what Pat is going for with this attack.



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I have, er, a semi-finalized version, but I've mostly put in the numbers I want or the numbers that make sense to me, balance suggestions/advice/whatever are certainly encouraged ^_^


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Well, everything checks out with me. I think what you have is good to go.

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Dang. I was kinda hoping to be the first to relate noise to new attacks to my PC in the future.... Oh wait, I already changed him with RP development. <_<;

approved. Though it would be appreciated to write profile 101 in your signature. >_>

anyway, post the profile in the PC profiles forum and post over Sattela HQ to register your EM wave fo-.... RE-register your EM wave form... Or something... Heck I dunno.

Happy destruction.
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