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| Johan Oresso & Fighter | |
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| Topic Started: Sep 12 2009, 05:29 PM (54 Views) | |
| Post #1 Sep 12 2009, 05:29 PM | Johan Oresso |
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Human: Name: Johan Oresso Age: 17 Gender: Male Description: He is skinny and stands at 6 feet. He has brown eyes and brown, almost black hair. He wears a pair of jeans, a blue T-shirt with yellow J on it, a blue jacket and white tennis shoes. Personality: He feels uneasy when talking to other people, but he is nice most of the time. He is the silent type that likes to think about things. Biography: Johan had been in an orphanage for as long as he could remember. Why he didn't knew. His time as an orphan was horrible, but then, something good happened when he was 14. Fire broke out in the orphanage. Of course, this wasn't good, but it was the perfect distraction for Johan to escape, which he did. The next two years, Johan had lived on the streets and was forced to steal food to survive. Although he hated it, this life was better than in the orphanage. Also, Johan managed to steal a Hunter VG. One night, Johan looked at the skies at night, when he saw a falling star! Johan then made a wish. "I wish I had a friend to share my life with." His life was lonely and he didn't had any friends. At that same moment, Fighter entered his Hunter VG. This was the start of their life together, and now, one year later, Johan is about to get his Wave Change. Wizard: Name: Fighter Gender: Male Description:  Personality: Fighter is very protective of Johan. He is, just like Johan, not very social. Because of being merged with the date of a virus, he can suddenly become angry for no reason and go on a rampage. Biography: Fighter was a wizard who, during his creation, had merged with the data of a virus. This caused him to rampage and break out of the lab where he was being kept. When he was fleeing from the Satella Police, he saw a kid with a Hunter VG. To escape from the Police, he entered the kid's Hunter and hided there. Of course, the kid was Johan. This was the start of their life together.
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| Post #2 Sep 12 2009, 06:09 PM | Omega |
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Not a bad character. Good and simple, which is the kind of profile I like. You've left yourself some room for character development, so thats good. For Dark Gun, just to make sure its not a typo, it breaks objects, or just pierces through them? The latter would be fine, considering your Sub Element, but if you actually break the obstacle that would be considered Breaking. I like the second ability. Its creative, but not overpowering. However, its more of a Poison based weapon :/. You could change your elements to Cursor and Poison if you want, unless you still want to be Dark. I'll leave that up to you. |
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| Post #3 Sep 13 2009, 02:54 AM | Johan Oresso |
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I edited the Dark Gun thing. I forget to say it DOESN'T break obstacles. Hmm, if I would want Dark to stay as my element, do I have to change my sub-weapon? |
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| Post #4 Sep 13 2009, 04:34 AM | Omega |
| Your first attack is more along the lines of piercing, so that would be defined as Cursor. You'll have to either change a weapon or your element to get it all to work. Sorry :/. I like this weapon set altogether, and I hate to see it not get approved on a technicality. If another staff member sees fit to wave the need for Poison element in your character to use the second attack, then you can leave it as is. |
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| Post #5 Sep 13 2009, 11:00 AM | Johan Oresso |
| I edited it. Armed Fighter is now Cursor/Poison instead of Dark/Cursor and I changed the names of the weapons. |
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| Post #6 Sep 13 2009, 02:10 PM | Omega |
| Since you changed the elements, approved. Wait for another approval before reposting this in the PC profiles section. |
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| Post #7 Sep 13 2009, 04:30 PM | Berserk |
| Does the poison effect last forever or just added damage for every card used? |
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| Post #8 Sep 14 2009, 03:51 PM | Johan Oresso |
| I don't understand what you think it is, but the sub-weapon damages someone when they use a battle card. It's with poison, but it's only once. You take the damage when using a card, and that's it. |
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| Post #9 Sep 14 2009, 04:35 PM | Berserk |
| Hmm... I still don't like it's effect, but it's not too damaging, so approved. |
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