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Zetta Orodane and Skeith; trying this again with the new format
Topic Started: Sep 13 2009, 01:53 AM (197 Views)
Bad-Ass Guardian Zetta
Human:
Name: Zetta Orodane
Age: 15
Gender: male

Description: Zetta Orodane stands typically at 5'9" tall and weighs in at 115 Lbs. Other than that he always wears clothes that are black or white in color, with a gold sash-like scarf adorning the top half of the suit he wears mostly, his hair is silver blonde and his eyes are pomegranite red. the areas around his eyes are jet black due to a near fatal accident that would have cost him his life. And as a countermeasure, is made to wear sunglasses known as the Xth Visor.

The Xth Visor is initialy tinted transparent black, but changes to goldenrod with a transparent tint when he is not around people, transparent silver when he stargazes, and back to transparent black for when he is around people, Xth Visor tuens to a clear transparence when he want's to show his eyes to those he would like to intimidate or show respect, even murderous intent, unless they are impersonating a friendly rival.
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{though the pic below is Haseo in his Xth forme, it is used to depict Zetta Orodane.}
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Personality: Zetta Orodane is your typical snide, sarcastic and overall antisocial bastard, despite that fact... He will open up to those who take the time to know of what he has been through. His parents had raised him to be a top grade student as they work in a hospital.

Zetta Orodane's hobbies include Playing video games{MMO's like 'The World' through the Xth Visor} traveling the wave road, drawing pictures, studying the stars, and practicing Martial Arts with his mentor and grandfather; Wodan 'Orochi' Orodane, who is one of the best fighters/assassins in the Orodane family.

Biography: Zetta Orodane attends middle school in echo ridge, he has good grades despite the fact that he hates math class and enjoys computer, art, science, and Phys. Education classes, he has a job working part-time at school as a dish washer and the pay he gets is good compared to what his father makes in terms of a paycheck{his father makes at least more than him by about 25%, he just makes a swift 25 dollars and stashes it in his safe for later} which completely defines him in terms of personality with one drawback being that he nearly suffered a fatal accident that would have sent him to the pearly gates of heaven.

His eyes were now perminantly dialated with a jet black hue outside of his irises, thanks to his parents fast thinking, but it made their sone more stoic and antisocial to those around him except them and his grandfather. His parents made him wear a special pair of sunglasses they had bought for him and he took to them like a duck to water, he even made a modification to them turning them into an Xth Visor.

He continued going to school and doing his side job so that he could make use of the money he earns in making a patent for the Xth Visor, his parents bought him a special computer called a Hunter VG on his 15th birthday, which he gave the wizard within the name to resemble the 1st phase epitaph; Skeith.

Wizard:
Name: Skeith
Gender: Male
Description: Skeith is one of the many AM-ians to be seen with a human as antisocial as Zetta Orodane, he lives within the Hunter VG straped to Zetta's arm. he resides within it and looks like a granite gray automaton, though he also holds a red wand. There are eye-like symbols on the chest, shoulders, lower arms and upper legs that have an oddly shaped yin-yang symbol, and is built for support and assassination.{Pic below is Skeith's original version}
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Personality: Quite like Zetta Orodane, he is sarcastic, but is quite the opposite to his Antisocialism and snide demeanor, he holds no grudge towards humans, telling his operator that all humans will someday face their destiny and be brought before the pearly gates of heaven or the firey pits of the underworld.

Biography: Skeith is one of eight Am-ians tasked to aid in virus assassination during times of peace, although the title he has been given did not suit him much, he continued to mow down viruses untill he found himself in the tightest situation that cost him his title, and he was sealed away along with the others, an obsolete unit.

Though he was given many chances to mend his ways, He chose the oppritunity to refuse all but one, and he was brought to earth during the wars that were conducted in secret and was placed in a special computer device called a Hunter VG.

He was Given to Zetta Orodane on his 15th birthday three years after the accident that almost took Zetta Orodanes life, and confides to him the laws of the wave road as well as teaching him the art of killing viruses.

Wave Conversion
 
Name: Xth Death
Element:Light
Sub Element:poison(for healing)
Gender: Male
Description: Zetta Orodane and Skeith fuse to form the wave warrior; Xth Death, this form would be just as big as MMNT Zero, but due to Zetta Orodane's height, Xth Death wave conversion is set to match the 5'9" mark.

The hands are clawed and the arms are oddly shaped as are its legs, eight Sword-like stabelizers adorn its back and the Xth visor turns pomegranite red, in addition to the the armor being white, with some of the parts black or gold, a third red eye adorns the top half of the head armor and a pair of what appear to be horns appear at the sides where there would be ears{The pic of Xth Skeith below is used to depict WCF: Xth Death}
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Weapon 1 Name: Satelite Beam
Weapon 1 Attack: Satelite Beam deals a pathetic 1% dmg rate with 4 light orbs fired -two orbs per one hand each- in rapid succession on one post turn, if charged for one post turn which depends on the charge percentage, unleashes a light beam that resembles the Shinku Hadouken that deals a normal 5% dmg with a charge cooldown rate of three post turns and cannot be used that following number of turns depending on the charge percentage. Xth Death can move and dash while shooting or charging up.

{Satelite beam charge rate:}

  • 0% charge: regular shot{4 hits deal pathetic damage, no charge cooldown}
  • 25% charge: Psycho Ball shot{4 hits deal pathetic damage, activates charge cooldown}
  • 50% charge: Kaiser Wave Shot{4 hits deal pathetic damage, activates charge cooldown, unusable till the following turn}
  • 75% charge: Kamehameya Wave Shot{Weak beam deals pathetic damage four times in a single hit, activates charge cooldown, unusable till after the folowing 2nd turn}
  • 100% Charge: Shinku Hadouken Shot{Beam attack deals moterate damage once, activates charge cooldown, unusable till after the following third turn}


Weapon 2 Name: Toxic gospel
Weapon 2 Attack: Xth Death rears back and launches a poisonous version of Cybeast Gregar's Gospel Breath, the attack deals a moderate 5% Dmg rate, if there are poison panels, if any, the attack damage is doubled to a high 10% damage rate.

{This is complete, please let me know what parts I might want to edit in or out, that way I know what is up.}
Edited by Bad-Ass Guardian Zetta, Nov 14 2009, 12:33 AM.
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Ah. .Hack//G.U. Great game. I'm not gung-hoe about converting characters from one game to another, but you did a pretty good job with this one. I've got no complaints about Zetta (except for the questionable PET, but as long as you're careful).

For Skeith, you obviously still need a description and bio. Since you're doing a whole .Hack reference here, I suggest either using Skeith's first form from the game or getting a picture of Skeith from the original .Hack games. Whatever you do for description will be fine, but just be careful about your bio. Modifying an AMian doesn't sound like it'll work too well, so don't be afraid to just let Skeith be a regular Wizard.

This is just a technical complaint (which really isn't a big deal), but the element "Healing" is classified as "Poison," so you can change that just to match the vocabulary used in SFRP. It seems odd, but Poison deals with anything HP related.

Describe your first attack more. Whats with the 4 orbs? Do they each fire at the same time, or just one of them does a post? Also give a heft cooldown for the charge attack, since Immense is ALOT to deal with a Character Weapon.

Data Drain needs to be lowered in damage and have a drawback, or needs a hefty drawback as well. I'll let you decide what you'd like to do for it.

I know it says you're not finished, but I figured I'd post here so I wouldn't forget later :P. Let us know when you finish.
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Will do, as I will focus on dealing HP related dmg percentage.

Also, I gave Data Drain a Bahamut Mega flare style cooldown rate, though 10% is not immense. I'll look at the rules and see though, as I have the gumption to forget.

EDIT: I am done, let me know what I might need to edit in or out.
Edited by Bad-Ass Guardian Zetta, Sep 14 2009, 12:59 AM.
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Berserk
Make the damage for weapon one pathetic each. Moderate per light deals a potential 20%. Which is too much for a weapon.

There's no need for a cooldown in weapon 2. If it's one use then you can make it absorb 10%.
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righty-o!

EDIT: edited that up a bit, and as you can see, I'm following a certain theme.
Edited by Bad-Ass Guardian Zetta, Sep 14 2009, 02:19 AM.
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Dang. Talk about a Mega Flare cooldown rate O_o. How about just a 10 turn cooldown (Not an auto hit, of course) or base it off of the game. You can damage an opponent by a certain amount until they get a "data break" and then you are allowed to use it once. Thats completely your call though. As is, its approved.

So for Satellite Beam, let me get this straight. Each turn, you can fire off 4 shots of Pathetic damage in quick succession or charge it to deal Low? The first part is fine, but the second part can be boosted, especially if you have a cooldown. You also need to state the cooldown rate for this attack as well.

One other thing I forgot to mention but is pretty important is your Xth visor. Throughout your profile, its a pretty important plot device, but I don't have a clue what it looks like XD. Just give it a description so it'll help give your profile a more full feeling.
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Will do.
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The orb charge attack won't need a cooldown if its just one hit of Moderate damage. You can boost the damage if you want to give it a 3 turn cooldown, but take in mind that it means you can't use this attack until the cooldown is over.

For Data Drain, what classifies as a data break? If you can only use it once per match, the cooldown after the attack isn't needed, so you can get rid of that. A 10 turn charge for essentially an auto hit for high damage and healing the same amount with a one use attribute sounds fine to me, despite it practically being an auto hit.
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Uhh... What's a Shinkou Hadouken?
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Rage_Kill
When you go down, down-right, right + Square while holding the R shoulder button with Evil Ryu or Akuma.

When you have a gauge of 3, that is when it is truly strong though Berserk. It resembles a laser sorta.

Yeah. A laser.
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I agree with R_K on that, but I'll have to edit though. it'll be useful to understand after.
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Berserk
Oh. The counterpart of Kamehameha from Marvel vs Capcom. Riiiight.
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Correct-a-mundo, Berserk, I even made a list that shows the attacks and their charge rate for the cooldown to take effect.
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Explain what a Data Break is, just for clarification.

Afterward, I will be able to approve it.
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Regarding Data Break:

'Data Breaking' is a form of unnatural phenominon that occures when a wave warrior hits a certain level of link points below their current capacity, those who have been 'Data Broken' are vulnerable to a specific attack before their data restores itself. A double edged sword that makes it difficult for both the person to data break the opponent, and the opponent who has been hit with the attack that broke their data field.
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