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| Some Kind Of Miracle; the way it SHOULD be | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 31 2007, 01:42 PM (1,124 Views) | |
| savvy32500 | Jan 31 2007, 01:42 PM Post #1 |
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SOME KIND OF MIRACLE Okay girls I made som edits so please go down to my last post ---its there......with the revisions and the next additions to the story.... LINK TO GREY'S ANATOMY FANFIC http://fanficga.5.forumer.com/index.php?showtopic=1602 |
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| ObscureAllure | Jan 31 2007, 03:02 PM Post #2 |
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I <3 you and your fic goodness. MORE I SAY! (LOL It's my turn to bug you about updates everyday, hehehe) |
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| flipflopmom | Jan 31 2007, 04:23 PM Post #3 |
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More Savvy! Its so nice to "read" you again! :rolleyes: |
 
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| CantWaitTillSept- Guest | Jan 31 2007, 05:01 PM Post #4 |
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Hope you'll be posting more soon. I can't wait to read more. :) |
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| sebjasbetaid | Jan 31 2007, 05:22 PM Post #5 |
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:wub: She's baaaaaaaaaack Lovely dahling... :D |
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| iwantmerhappy | Jan 31 2007, 05:27 PM Post #6 |
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Hey Savvy-I am so excited to read more of your fanfic. :rolleyes: |
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| oncetherewasaway | Feb 1 2007, 02:23 AM Post #7 |
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[size=7]I am atwitter with excitement.....you are back to writing. This is officially my first post to any of you fics.....always lurked...never commented. Past due, way past due. Please continue as you were truly missed :rolleyes:[/size] |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 1 2007, 09:15 AM Post #8 |
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SOME KIND OF MIRACLE Meredith was still there, wearing the look of sheer exhaustion and shock on her face. She hadn’t spoken to anybody since the news report blasted across the television screen in the pit, “ RENOWNED NEUROSURGEON DR. DEREK SHEPHERD PRESUMED DEAD IN FERRYBOAT BLAST.” When she first heard it, she shook her head as if to will it away, but in that moment it all became a crushing reality as Dr. Mark Sloane walked into the pit with a look of loss so pronounced that it took her breath away. She quietly stood up, put the sutures down and without so much as a word to the patient she was stitching, Meredith walked off, to the only place she could think to go--- the attending locker room. It was there that she sat, with Derek’s locker open--- his sweater, the one he had worn into work that fateful morning, held lovingly against her chest, her face buried deep within its thread. She was breathing in the scent of the man who had captured her heart and captivated her soul for the last year of her life. The man who had loved her more than any other ---the one who had broken her so completely, but then came back much to her surprise, to heal the wounds he himself had inflicted on them both. He wasn’t perfect, far from it, but he was hers in every way that mattered. And she loved him. From the moment she had laid eyes on him, she was done. And now--- Meredith sat trying to process the words that had made her world stop cold---- Dr. Derek Shepherd, presumed dead. Derek, DEAD. As Mark and Addison mournfully entered the locker room, Meredith inhaled deeply--- giving into a wave of grief that could no longer be held at bay. Her shoulders began to shake, Mark kneeled down and joined her --- took her into his arms succumbing to his own wave of grief. Addison, who had stood back at the door, slowly approached both of them and cautiously laid a hand on Meredith’s shoulder---it was the only way she knew how to show her support and to allow herself to grieve the loss of the man she had been married to for over eleven years. This weird moment was not lost to Meredith, she knew just how awkward this twisted scene must have been for Addison Forbes Montgomery, formerly Shepherd. Her sobs softly relented as she reached up and took hold of Addison’s hand. They stayed like that for what seemed like hours----each one holding onto the other. Bracing themselves against the truth of the situation, the cold hard reality that they would never see him again. Meredith finally pulled herself out of Mark’s arms and sat straight up. “I’m okay…I just need…. a little more time…. for this to…(Meredith inhaled sharply)…I need to be alone.” Mark swallowed his own grief for her sake and replied, “sure thing, gorgeous…...Addison and I…we’ll go.” Meredith sat, staring blankly ahead, willing this reality to be just a dream---her very worst nightmare. Mark and Addison left Meredith alone to pull herself together just as she had wanted. As they immerged into the busy hallway, all eyes fell upon them. No one stopped performing their jobs, they just needed some kind of quick acknowledgement that their friend and colleague was alive and breathing---that she wasn’t just a crumpled shell of a person clinging to a cold hard locker room floor. Mark locked eyes with George and then Dr. Webber. He nodded his head to them as a sign that she would indeed appear from her self imposed prison. Dr. Webber took in a cleansing breath---almost willing her to leave the confines of that room at that very painful moment. Dr. Bailey shifted out from behind Dr. Webber and approached them both. “Addison,…you okay?” Bailey asked. Addison shuddered a reply, “yes….no….” She then she simply wiped one rogue tear from her cheek. “None of this makes any sense, but you’ll survive…we’ll all get through it.” It was a feeble attempt at encouragement, but even Miranda failed to convince herself. Addison whispered, “tell that to Dr. Grey…..and his family…..(realization dawned on her)… Oh God, Mark….(Addison whimpered) …. Derek’s family.” Bailey then interjected a quiet, “Oh Lord.” Mark began to rub his brow realizing the obvious and crushing oversight. “Dr. Sloane?” Izzie stepped forward. “Yes, Dr. Stevens.” “Is she okay…Meredith…she’s strong but….she really loved him….(Glancing at Addison then quickly back at Mark) I mean she fought like hell not to….but she really loved him….and they were…they were happy…I’m sorry Dr. Montgomery…its just she’s my friend and they….they were really happy together….” Dr. Yang decided she had waited long enough. “Look, I need to go in there…Meredith is my…” “Dr. Yang,” Mark replied, “ give her time….she just wants a little more time.” “Like you’d know what she wants or needs” “Dr. Yang, that was uncalled for….Mark was Derek’s best friend!” Addison retorted. “Yeah right…the best friend who banged Derek’s wife in his own bed….and what is it with you and your misty eyes…you came here and blew her life to hell…you played on your husbands guilt…. but…. you never once gave him the whole story, did you?….now you’re gonna stand here and attempt to be all protective of the woman he loved like you know her…like you can relate to her pain!?” Addison’s anger exploded, “ He was my husband for eleven years, Dr. Yang!” “Emphasis on was, Dr. Montgomery…he was your husband….now move out of my way!” Cristina pushed through the wall of Sloane/Montgomery and entered the attending locker room. She found Meredith sitting on the bench, wiping her wet cheeks with the back of her hands, Derek’s sweater now worn securely over her scrubs. She looked up and found comfort in Cristina---her friend, essentially her sister. Mer’s eyes rimmed with fresh tears as Cristina walked over to her and sat down without saying a word. Meredith simply rested her head on Dr. Yang’s shoulder. “I’m gonna have to peel that off of your sorry ass now aren’t I.” Cristina said it more like a sarcastic statement rather than a question. “yeah..” Meredith whispered. “”hmm…that’s what I thought.” Meredith sighed. “what?” Cristina quietly asked. A painful whimper escaped Meredith’s throat, “…I didn’t tell him (she began to cry again)….I never told him.” “never told him what, Mer.” Meredith shuddered, “… I love him….that I never stopped….he died today (her grief threatened to overtake her body as she began to tremble--- attempting to speak through uncontrollable sobs)…he died today…. and…and…… he didn’t know.” Cristina wrapped her arms tightly around her shoulders and quietly said. “he knew Meredith…I promise you…..he knew.” |
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| McSnoopy69 | Feb 1 2007, 10:27 AM Post #9 |
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[size=7]OH MY GOD SAVVY!!!!! You need to keep going with this....totally awesome and next time I'll make sure I have lots of kleenex ready!!!![/size] |
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| CantWaitTillSept | Feb 1 2007, 10:52 AM Post #10 |
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WOW...all I can say is wow. Damn good Savvy! :) |
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| sebjasbetaid | Feb 1 2007, 11:06 AM Post #11 |
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Someone needs to get us some more smileys over here, I really need a blubbering one...I'm bawling, you wrote Cris and Mer together so perfectly...Oh yeah, I love that Cris took Addison down a peg or two :lol: |
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| oncetherewasaway | Feb 1 2007, 11:33 AM Post #12 |
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:( That was wonderfully sad...Mer needs her person. And yeah, it's probably a good idea to read your fic in the evening.....not a good way to start a day all weepy and stuff. Thanks Savvy |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 1 2007, 12:46 PM Post #13 |
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A short while later Meredith stood up, steadied herself and closed Derek’s locker. She then turned and faced the door. Cristina rose and exchanged a look of solidarity with her friend. “Ready?” she asked. “Not really….but what choice do I have.” Meredith replied. Cristina extended her hand to her but Meredith looked at her skeptically. “Seriously…your Cristina…you don’t hold hands.” Meredith sniffed. “I don’t hug people either but that just happened..” Meredith allowed a slight smile of gratitude to form on her lips. “Thanks Cristina.” “This is so not something to thank me for………it just is.” Cristina said sadly. “Yeah….it just is….. lets go.” Meredith attempted resolve. Cristina took hold of Meredith’s hand and then wrapped a protective arm around her waist. “I am so gonna catch hell for this.” she remarked. “Yes you are….but just blame it on the girl with the dead boyfriend.” Hugging her tighter, Cristina sarcastically replied, “No…I’ll just blame the dead boyfriend….He’ll finally be useful after all the trouble he caused. “You’re always so giving…..in a tragically sad and sadistic way.” Meredith stated. “Aren’t I though…it’s a gift, really” Cristina opened the door and watched as Meredith slowly left the safety of her quiet sanctuary. They had barely made it out the door when she was immediately bombarded by their friends. “Meredith….you okay?” George questioned her. “Mer…we’re here for you…whatever you need.” Izzie offered. “Dr. Grey…Take all the time you need….get things settled…we’ll be here when you’re ready.” Webber gently stated. “Hang in there, Grey.” Alex remarked. She didn’t answer any of them, just held firmly to Cristina’s hand as they slowly made their way down the hall toward the intern locker room. Meredith needed air…honestly she just needed to not feel overwhelmed by everyone’s well wishes and support. They had walked nearly 10 feet or so when they both heard the rise of Dr. Bailey’s voice---- the sound stopping Mer in her tracks. “What the hell?…” Meredith couldn’t explain it…she just felt the warmth of his eyes upon her back. She froze and nearly forgot to breathe. |
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| jen75lovesga | Feb 1 2007, 01:06 PM Post #14 |
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Savvy! You are just awesome! You were the original cause of my fanfic addiction and this one just blows me away!! |
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| McSnoopy69 | Feb 1 2007, 01:07 PM Post #15 |
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[size=7]Is there more Savvy???? Please say there is more...honestly I'm all stocked up on kleenex...ready for the happy tears!!!![/size] |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 1 2007, 01:39 PM Post #16 |
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OF COURSE THERE IS MORE!!!! But I'm POSTING IT IN SECTIONS---BUILDING THE SUSPENSE---you know the kind JIME USED LIKE A WEAPON....MUAHAHAHAHAHAH |
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| McSnoopy69 | Feb 1 2007, 03:41 PM Post #17 |
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[size=7]Awesome!!!! Are you going to keep posting on both sites? Much easier to read here but can also add to my fic bookmarks over there too!!![/size] |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 1 2007, 03:54 PM Post #18 |
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I will always post here first---- since you girls are my peeps...lol I will post over at the fanficga site alittle slower.... |
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| Brightsweetlady | Feb 1 2007, 04:01 PM Post #19 |
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The Queen of Fiction writes again. Thank you, thank you. You not only write wonderfully but you capture each character as they are and as they sound. You make them a visual while reading your stories. Only a true story teller can do this. |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 2 2007, 10:48 AM Post #20 |
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Thank you indeed! Here's a short update. Meredith couldn’t explain it…she just felt the warmth of his eyes upon her back. She froze and nearly forgot to breathe. “Dr. Shepherd….you’re…. you’re…. alive!” George stammered the obvious. “Damn dude…. you even cheat death!” Alex chuckled. Dr. Webber briskly walked in front of Derek and barked, “ You want to explain to me why the hell this entire hospital was misinformed of your death….how you are in fact standing here in front of everybody very much alive, Dr. Shepherd!?” “Ahhh….they got it wrong?” Derek attempted humor but it fell flat. Meredith had spent a couple of hours silently praying that she would wake up from the surreal dream she was having---the one where her boyfriend was dead. But now, now hearing his voice she was caught between an overwhelming rush of relief and a seething hot anger rising up in her due to her supposed dead boyfriend being very much alive and attempting to make light of the very obvious emotional roller coaster they had all collectively just stepped off of. What should have been an overwhelming high was suddenly an all consuming low that threatened to extinguish the air from her lungs. Meredith slowly turned around and while plastering somewhat of a smile on her tear stricken face walked up to the man she had spent mourning the last few hours --- and proceeded to slap him senseless with all of her strength! |
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