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| Some Kind Of Miracle; the way it SHOULD be | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 31 2007, 01:42 PM (1,128 Views) | |
| Momtoatrio | Feb 2 2007, 02:25 PM Post #21 |
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[size=7]HA! You go, Meredith! I think that they need to make-up now...or maybe we could pretend this is the show and not see any more interaction between the two of them and Joe could tell us about them...Okay...being nice! I love it! More, please!!![/size] |
 
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| oncetherewasaway | Feb 2 2007, 07:42 PM Post #22 |
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Give him one for me Mer....a backhand....for the other side of his face :angry: |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 2 2007, 09:57 PM Post #23 |
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Meredith slowly turned around and while plastering somewhat of a smile on her tear stricken face walked up to the man she had spent the last few hours mourning --- and proceeded to slap him senseless with all of her strength! As soon as the sound of hand meeting face reverberated throughout the pit, everyone stopped. Alex couldn’t help but let out a chuckle, Izzie sucked in a quick breath. Cristina dropped her head and immediately attempted to conceal the smile illuminating her face. Dr. Bailey mumbled under her breath but loud enough to be heard, “well I guess you didn’t see that comin.” Derek was struck by the force behind the slap, his eyes immediately caught glimpse of Addison and Mark exchanging a look of admiration. He then looked into the eyes of the woman he adored and while rubbing his cheek, he absorbed the pain that was raging in her heart. He felt small and stupid. It was only in that moment that he realized the hell he must have caused her---the confusion he caused everyone. “I deserved that.” he said. Meredith’s breathing was labored and her shoulders heaved forcefully up and down. “Yes you did.” she replied quietly. Dr. Webber stepped forward and stated, “ Take Dr. Grey home….I don’t want to see either one of you for at least 48 hours…..when you return expect to receive the ass kicking of your medical career. After that, I MAY allow you to explain why you failed to follow protocol…why you failed to check in with the triage coordinator.” “Dr. Web…..” Derek interjected. “Not now, Dr. Shepherd…you heard me…take Dr. Grey home…she’s been through enough today……48 hours…..my office first thing.” “yes sir.” he replied. Meredith turned around and began to head back toward the intern locker room. Derek began to follow her without any protest. As he walked past Mark and Addison, Mark stopped him and said, “It’s a good thing you showed up when you did…we were just about to call your family.” It suddenly dawned on him--- even they had been touched by the thought of his death, and even though things were still quite unresolved, he felt a pang of guilt erupt through his body, “I’m sorry….both of you…I’m sorry I caused you to worry.” “Hey, don’t sweat it Derek, we’re just your ex- family….the one you really need to worry about apologizing to is that amazing girl who just about broke your jaw…..my moneys on her by the way….I predict she’ll win the next round too.” Mark oozed. Derek heaved a sigh and walked off toward the locker room where ‘that amazing girl’ as Mark accurately described, was probably plotting his very real and deserving death. As he reached the door it swiftly swung open with a force. Meredith nearly ran him over. She didn’t look at him but quickly passed him by on her way down the hall toward the exit. Realizing he had failed to keep up with her due to his sudden diagnosis of guilt and regret, she abruptly stopped and spun back around, “Are you just gonna stand there or have you also forgotten how to walk and drive!?” Derek pulled himself together and joined her--- keenly aware of how she was avoiding holding his hand or even looking at him. He knew without a doubt, it would be a very long night and if her were a betting man, like Mark, his money would be placed squarely on her. |
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| Brightsweetlady | Feb 2 2007, 10:20 PM Post #24 |
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Savvy, as I said before reading what you write goes into my eyes, and into my brain and becomes a visual picture to me. There are very few writers who can have this effect on me and you are one of them, so keep writing....... I wouldn't want to be in Derek's shoes tonight for all the tea in China lol |
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| McSnoopy69 | Feb 3 2007, 03:42 PM Post #25 |
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[size=7]Loved it Savvy!!!!! Keep up the great work!!!! I want more!!!![/size] |
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| Xbrokensound23 | Feb 3 2007, 04:49 PM Post #26 |
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awesome job on this fic! This really should be the way it is. They have already had more screen time then they have had all season. |
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| Guest | Feb 4 2007, 12:46 AM Post #27 |
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I'm loving this, Savvy!!! Can't wait for more. Yours was the first GA fanfic that I ever read (over the summer months, over at the abc board) and I am so thrilled that you are writing again! leslie |
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| flipflopmom | Feb 4 2007, 12:07 PM Post #28 |
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Yay! Sav, I love it! Give us some celebration sex! :P |
 
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| oncetherewasaway | Feb 5 2007, 12:43 AM Post #29 |
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More please :wub: |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 5 2007, 11:43 AM Post #30 |
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Derek pulled himself together and joined her--- keenly aware of how she was avoiding holding his hand or even looking at him. He knew without a doubt, it would be a very long night and if her were a betting man, like Mark, his money would be placed squarely on her. They arrived back to the warmth and welcoming comfort of Meredith’s home. She walked in as Derek closed the door behind her, watching as she placed her purse and keys down on the foyer table. He stood awkwardly awaiting an invitation even though they had essentially been living together. However, tonight they were an odd if not grotesque version of themselves---so he just stood there waiting, anticipating her next move, wondering if it would include an opportunity to explain himself, or better yet, the absolution and peace of her loving arms. Meredith slowly turned around to face him, took just a step forward before stopping herself. The scene oddly reminded Derek of the night he came by to check on her after the explosion. But this time, it was Meredith’s face awash with worry and relief. “Let me explain..." he pleaded. Meredith drew in a sharp breath and replied, “I thought you died today and all I could really think of….was how you died today without knowing.” He stared deeply into her eyes hoping to understand, “wi…..without knowing….I don’t under….” “I thought you died today… without knowing that I loved you, which is pathetic I know when you consider we’ve been back together for a while and…you tell me that you love me all the time….I thought you died today without knowing that …I’ve been… (she swallowed hard) afraid to say it thinking if I did…(Meredith wiped away the tears that were now freely flowing down her face) I would lose you like before…” Derek stood frozen to that spot, his eyes pooling with his own unshed tears. “you love me?” he questioned. “I love you” she answered. It was only then that he allowed a smile to break upon his face. He hesitated momentarily, as if still seeking permission to approach her and then he sighed, “that’s good….to hear you say it I mean…it’s really good.” “I just wish I wasn’t so….” “angry?” he spoke. “yes” she whispered. “Mer” “what.” “come here..” he said. “why..” she asked. “I’m too afraid to move… but you need to feel my arms around you and I need to put my arms around you…pleeease (he groaned)…come here…” Meredith knew he was right, even though she was still angry, she needed the comfort only he could give her, the peace only found in his arms and so, without waiting another second, she walked into the warmth of his embrace. “I’m glad you didn’t die today..” she said as she buried her face into the hollow of his neck. “Oh baby….(he said as he wrapped his arms tightly around her) I’m glad I didn’t die today….. but I’m really sorry you thought I did….” |
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| McSnoopy69 | Feb 5 2007, 12:20 PM Post #31 |
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[size=7]Awesome Savvy!!!! Maybe you and Jime should send links to your fics to the writers blog like Gravedancer so they will know that some people know how to put our favourite couple together!!!!![/size] |
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| oncetherewasaway | Feb 5 2007, 01:32 PM Post #32 |
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Freaking great Savvy!!! That's exactly how Derek is supposed to comfort Mer, with his loving arms around her. :wub: |
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| ObscureAllure | Feb 5 2007, 04:03 PM Post #33 |
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*Cough hack update cough* |
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| flipflopmom | Feb 5 2007, 10:28 PM Post #34 |
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[size=7]I feel like we are back in the Mer Der drought of the Summer of 06...not anymore...thanks to Savvy![/size] [size=14]MORE PLEASE![/size] |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 8 2007, 10:43 AM Post #35 |
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They stood in that spot at the foot of the stairs holding one another, not speaking, just wrapped up in each other’s arms. Derek thought that maybe now he could help her understand the circumstance he found himself in at the scene of the disaster. He started to speak but she cut him off. “please…I know you…and I know you think I need to hear what happened out there---but right now Derek….(she looked into his eyes)…I want to go upstairs and spend the next few hours with you….naked in bed……I just want it to be about you and me right now….no one else…no patients, hospital or tragic ferryboats…just us…..okay?” He cupped her face in his hands, “shhhh….no more talking…I got it.” Smiling, he then swept her into his arms and carried her up the stairs, softly kissing her along the way. When they reached her bedroom he then gently set her feet back down on the floor. She placed her hands on his chest, drawing tiny circles with her pointer finger. She looked at him, somewhat still in awe that he was standing in front of her, “I’m sorry about the fight we had this morning.” “Mer..” “No really, I said some pretty stupid things…things I really didn’t mean…..I’m glad you’re everywhere….especially here…..with me….” “Sshhhh….no more talking….( he said while kissing down her jaw line)…you’re knight in shining ‘whatever’ wants to get you naked…..” Meredith giggled as Derek began to pull her sweater up over her head. She then helped him with his, “ have I ever told you how turned on I get whenever you wear this” Derek was puzzled. “Really….it’s just a dark blue sweater…” he whispered into her ear while unbuttoning her pants. “I know….its just…..you look….good enough to eat…..” With that comment Derek stopped nibbling on her ear and smiled at her. “you hungry?” Derek smirked. “yes….famished..” she stated as her fingers quickly unzipped his pants. He raised and eyebrow at her indicating he was ready to give her whatever she needed. Meredith licked and then bit her bottom lip as she sat down on the edge of the bed, she looked up at him and smiled pulling his pants and boxers down to the floor. His erection sprang up and she giggled, “you’re too easy…” “hmm…I just know a good thing.” he reasoned. Meredith took hold of him with her hands and then placed her mouth just over the head of his cock, slowly rolling her tongue over it while softly moaning. Derek shuddered exhaling the breath he had been holding. He entangled his hands into her honey blonde hair and began to speak ‘their’ language of sex and love. “you look so good doing that…” he said in a hushed voice. She glanced up into his eyes and smiled while she licked up and down the shaft before taking all of him in as far as she could, sucking and licking it up and down, up and down….. Derek groaned, “ohhhh baby….” “I love having you in my mouth….its dirty……makes me your… dirty girl” she whispered in between rolling licks. Derek lightly chuckled, “mmmm….that’s good (he shuddered)…its all for you…suck that cock my dirty…dirty girl……ahhh” He began to shake. “Mer……I’m gonna explode..” Meredith wasn’t usually the girl that liked when a guy came in her mouth, but with Derek it was different. She became completely aroused the few times he did it----wanting to drink all of him in. He was always so vulnerable with her afterwards, it was almost as if she was the only one he had ever done this with, but she knew she was probably kidding herself--- he had been married for eleven years! Still, there was something ‘special’ about this for them. She adored the way he’d look at her with amazement like she had just accomplished something huge. And now that he knew she loved him, the desire to consume his nectar was fast becoming a raging fire in her belly. She pushed all thoughts out of her mind and began to use her hands along with her mouth gently squeezing his balls. “Come baby….please” she implored. Derek gripped her hair tightly and began to gently thrust in and out of her mouth, careful to not push too hard or far. “yes….you want it…don’t you dirty girl..” he managed to ask. “Mm-hmm…” she continued to suck and stroke. “ah ..okay baby….here it comes….ahhhhhhh” He let out a low guttural moan Meredith looked up and watched Derek’s body begin to tremble as he emptied himself. She moaned, consumed by the delight of watching the man she loved completely coming undone in front of her, while swallowing every drop. |
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| McSnoopy69 | Feb 8 2007, 11:31 AM Post #36 |
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[size=7]That was soooooooooo goooooooood!!!!!!![/size] |
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| Martinigirl70 | Feb 8 2007, 11:37 AM Post #37 |
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Newbie here....HOLY CRAP Batman.....it's getting hot in here!!! |
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| flipflopmom | Feb 8 2007, 11:49 AM Post #38 |
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[size=14]HER TURN! HER TURN! :)[/size] |
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| oncetherewasaway | Feb 8 2007, 12:06 PM Post #39 |
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Now that's what I wanna see over my morning coffee :rolleyes: |
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| savvy32500 | Feb 8 2007, 06:07 PM Post #40 |
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okay the Meredith and Derek celibacy has officially come to an end...hee hee The last tremor left his body and Meredith finally withdrew her mouth from his well worked member. He slowly dropped to his knees and nuzzled his head into her neck inhaling her sweet aroma. “I am a very lucky man, Dr. Grey….I want you to know that I know that….” Derek took a moment to steady his breathing but then he reached his arms around her and unsnapped her bra releasing her breasts from their lacy prison. Meredith played with the hair at the base of his neck causing him to shiver from her touch. “I love doing that with you….I never really liked it before…. but with you…I can’t help it…sometimes I can’t get the picture out of my mind…..” She bit her bottom lip and smiled while nuzzling her cheek against Derek’s head. Derek took hold of her hands and laced their fingers together. “So, in addition to being my dirty girl…you’re also a little porny?” he remarked. “alot actually..” Meredith then looked into his eyes and drew in a sharp breath. He lifted his head from the nape of her neck . “what..” he asked. “nothing..” “Mer?….I know that look….that look is definitely you’re something look…..out with it…” She began to shake her head, “ it’s nothing, really….” He brushed the hair out of her eyes. “I’m kneeling in front of you naked with my pants around my ankles…you just gave me one of the hottest blow-jobs of my life---the other ones also being credited to you…and you’re gonna NOT tell me what you’re thinking?..” Meredith couldn’t help but laugh out loud. “So I’m the only one responsible for any and all of your blow-jobs?…..riggght….. Dr. Shepherd….” she teased. “no…I said the hot blow jobs…..you are responsible for those…” He leaned his forehead against hers. “mmmm…..I guess that’s a good thing…”she said looking into his eyes. “come on….before I make you putty in my hands…talk…no avoiding..” “It’s stupid really…..it’s just….that thing we do….it feels special…like its something unique to us…I know I’m being silly…..its just hard to think… that you’ve done that before with other girls and…..” “Addison…” he stated as a matter of fact. “yeah….her..” Derek thought for a moment and then decided to just deal with it head on, no pun intended. “Okay…I know you’ll find this hard to believe because most guys are just animals….but not everybody does that thing….there are some men out there that are strictly missionary… women too….even some OBGYN’s… that I shall not name, that have not ever enjoyed a neurosurgeon… who shall remain nameless…exploding into their mouth…” “you’d say just about anything wouldn’t you?” she giggled. “no…what I am saying is… I love you….and that thing with us is unique….and sex with you is perfect….and I don’t want to do that with anyone else Meredith Grey…..only you..” “so you do like me dirty and porny?…” He gently eased her back onto the bed pulling her pants and panties off. “dirty and porny with you is the most erotic….(he began kissing up the inside of her legs)….most scintillating…..most satisfying sex I have ever had…..but making love to you …is even better than that….” Derek moved his mouth into her wet mound causing her to moan and writhe beneath him. She took a fist full of his hair into each of her hands and held on as he lapped up her sweet juices. “ahh……Derek….mmmm that feels so good..” “you taste good baby…” Derek licked and sucked her pussy until her legs shook. She couldn’t think straight and found it hard to keep quiet. Every whimper and moan urged him to take her over the edge. He looked up at her smiling as he worked his magic. “this pussy belongs to me now…dirty girl..” he growled. Meredith shuddered beneath him getting dangerously close to splintering into a billion pieces. “Derek!…” she pleaded completely turned on by his musings. “I want to hear you say it…..” He sucked her clit long and hard. “I….. I belong to you..” she whimpered. He quickly nipped her just hard enough to get her attention. “that’s not what I wanted to hear…dirty girl…say it!…” He opened her legs wider and drove his tongue deep into her core. Meredith almost lost it then….Derek was a master with his tongue but the pleasure was heightened hearing him playfully talking dirty. “my pussy…. belongs to you!….ahhhh…Derek!….oh my god…I’m gonna come…..I’m gonna come!…..ahhhhhhh!” she screamed. Meredith fell blissfully off the cliff riding the wave of ecstasy…trembling beneath the heat of his mouth. He sucked her sweet honey dry, licking his lips before kissing his way up to her breasts taking in one nipple at a time, sucking and biting, finding her collarbone, marking her flesh as he went. He used one hand to hold himself as he placed the head of his cock at the entrance to her wet pussy “open your eyes and look at me…” he gently commanded . Meredith’s eyes fluttered open. “you….are all I want in this world…” he declared. She smiled seeing the love there in his eyes and then wickedly said, “fuck your dirty girl, Derek….I belong to you…” Derek thrust into her, impaling himself as deep as he could go. They quickly found the rhythm that begged to be played. Over and over again with syntrivical motion he buried himself inside her--- hungering to close any and all distance that physically existed between them. She touched his face and drew him into a kiss where their tongues danced and the taste of their come mingled together in their mouth just as it was doing deep inside of her. “I love you Derek……please (she whispered)…come inside of me..” Derek readjusted her legs so that they were tucked up high under his arms. He began to thrust deeper and harder holding them so he could bore into her center. He felt the walls of her pussy clamp tight around his cock. Meredith arched her back, tensing every muscle in her body. Derek continued to drive into her until he felt the seering hot lightening strike within him signaling the warm crushing wave that was to flow. He wrapped his arms tightly around her body riding the quake of their orgasm, loving the freedom of coming deep inside her. Their physical hunger for one another satiated, Derek again looked into the face of the woman who had changed his life. “I love you Meredith….thank you for saving me.” he said in between soft, tender kisses. She gently smiled as new tears rimmed her eyes, “I think we saved each other…” |
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